Look out!
A war zone13 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This seems like good, old fashioned advice to me. It kind of makes me scared to find out who might be needing to hear it. I think I would already be hiding, myself. *smile*
Thanks for the grin. Good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This seems like good, old fashioned advice to me. It kind of makes me scared to find out who might be needing to hear it. I think I would already be hiding, myself. *smile*
Thanks for the grin. Good luck!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Many thanks Robyn
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welcome!
Comment from Gail Denham
Is there a war on - I've heard there's terrible things being done in some parts of Africa. Scary. Tribes have fought against each other for centuries. I hope we dont' ahve to send soldiers.
Good poem
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Is there a war on - I've heard there's terrible things being done in some parts of Africa. Scary. Tribes have fought against each other for centuries. I hope we dont' ahve to send soldiers.
Good poem
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thanks Gail
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Interesting poem for this contest. I liked your image. You said so much in a few words. It was a bit sarcastic in a funny way. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Interesting poem for this contest. I liked your image. You said so much in a few words. It was a bit sarcastic in a funny way. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest. ~Brenda
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thanks Brenda
Comment from Sharon Haiste
You tell a clear story in so very few words for the Under Ten Competition.
Not an easy think to do.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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You tell a clear story in so very few words for the Under Ten Competition.
Not an easy think to do.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thanks Sharon
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Good one. Small poem with a very large message. The picture is more than adequate since it says more than the poem. A thousand words!
Nicely done, I love the poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Good one. Small poem with a very large message. The picture is more than adequate since it says more than the poem. A thousand words!
Nicely done, I love the poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Many thanks
Comment from Rmocruz
You have presented a large, valid message in this brief, correct to format
contest entry. The visual art is very appropriate in enhancing your message.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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You have presented a large, valid message in this brief, correct to format
contest entry. The visual art is very appropriate in enhancing your message.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Many thanks.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is a really interesting writing prompt entry. i love the war poster from 88 that you included with this, as well as the rhyme at the end. hehe :D best of luck to you in the contest ^.^
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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this is a really interesting writing prompt entry. i love the war poster from 88 that you included with this, as well as the rhyme at the end. hehe :D best of luck to you in the contest ^.^
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Many thanks Miranda.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! No, I know war's not funny, but the expression itself is comical: can almost picture an officer in the field grabbing one of his stunned non-coms and tossing him by his vest into cover... ;) :) This is a great original offering for the contest - best of luck! ;) :)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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LOL! No, I know war's not funny, but the expression itself is comical: can almost picture an officer in the field grabbing one of his stunned non-coms and tossing him by his vest into cover... ;) :) This is a great original offering for the contest - best of luck! ;) :)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thanks Yvette.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Well, this is certainly under ten words! But, you give a whole story in those few words. What's not to understand!
Run for cover! (get out of harm's way!) There's a war on! (Can't you see and hear them shooting at you?? You Moron! (Are you that stupid that you don't realize something's wrong when people around you are falling down dead at your feet??)
See~ told you that you wrote an entire poem in less than 10 words!'
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Well, this is certainly under ten words! But, you give a whole story in those few words. What's not to understand!
Run for cover! (get out of harm's way!) There's a war on! (Can't you see and hear them shooting at you?? You Moron! (Are you that stupid that you don't realize something's wrong when people around you are falling down dead at your feet??)
See~ told you that you wrote an entire poem in less than 10 words!'
Good luck with the contest!
Patty
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thanks you seem to like my poem so I'm puzzled by the 4 stars. But hey ho.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written under ten word poem. There are many people who walk with their heads in the clouds and never see they are entering a war zone until someone screams to tell them that.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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A very well-written under ten word poem. There are many people who walk with their heads in the clouds and never see they are entering a war zone until someone screams to tell them that.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thanks Sandra
