Fear
One day at a time44 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's word were clear, interesting, creative and gave good advise.
I really liked the last stanza - it really said for me "let go and live each
day". Thank you.... The poem flows and connects well.
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The author's word were clear, interesting, creative and gave good advise.
I really liked the last stanza - it really said for me "let go and live each
day". Thank you.... The poem flows and connects well.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
another great poem. Which is more important health or wealth? I can honestly say that if we didn't have our health there wouldn't be any wealth.
Keep up the great writing.
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another great poem. Which is more important health or wealth? I can honestly say that if we didn't have our health there wouldn't be any wealth.
Keep up the great writing.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from dragonpoet
Taking things day by day is a good way to live. We all get new aches and pains as we age and we shouldn't let that worry us. Nicely written
sonnet.
Keep writing
Joan
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Taking things day by day is a good way to live. We all get new aches and pains as we age and we shouldn't let that worry us. Nicely written
sonnet.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Susan Larson
Living in fear does not add even a moment to your life so why waste precious time? Even if you die tomorrow living in fear today gains you nothing. Very well written.
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Living in fear does not add even a moment to your life so why waste precious time? Even if you die tomorrow living in fear today gains you nothing. Very well written.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Hitcher
I agree with you there my friend. Live life to the full, get out and enjoy it, experience it and embrace all that it has to offer. None of us no when our time will be up so live every day like it could be your last and you will have an awesome ride : ))
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I agree with you there my friend. Live life to the full, get out and enjoy it, experience it and embrace all that it has to offer. None of us no when our time will be up so live every day like it could be your last and you will have an awesome ride : ))
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem, Jay. It has an excellent message that is so true. So many waste time of what could be (fears) that life passes them by. Great flow and rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your poem, Jay. It has an excellent message that is so true. So many waste time of what could be (fears) that life passes them by. Great flow and rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about fear that takes our joy of life away. We should live each day with faith an expectation of everything good and wholesome will come our way.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about fear that takes our joy of life away. We should live each day with faith an expectation of everything good and wholesome will come our way.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Rmocruz
This solidly rhymed poem presents a valid universal message with great
wisdom, no visual required. I can personally relate to it.
Very well penned and appreciated.
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This solidly rhymed poem presents a valid universal message with great
wisdom, no visual required. I can personally relate to it.
Very well penned and appreciated.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Another skillfully-written, wise, moving poem, Jaybird. Yes, there is much in life that can make us fearful, especially as we age. Most of them are beyond our control. We must pray--and live.
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Another skillfully-written, wise, moving poem, Jaybird. Yes, there is much in life that can make us fearful, especially as we age. Most of them are beyond our control. We must pray--and live.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
Comment from gudbjorg
This is a poem with a powerful message, written with a beautiful flow and rhythm, casting its pearls of wisdom like confetti in every stanza. The choice of words and rhyme marks the author as an experienced writer and well-read reader. It has a style that I feel is profound in its simplicity and clarity, leaving the reader with a positive road to follow at its end. Thank you! Well written.
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This is a poem with a powerful message, written with a beautiful flow and rhythm, casting its pearls of wisdom like confetti in every stanza. The choice of words and rhyme marks the author as an experienced writer and well-read reader. It has a style that I feel is profound in its simplicity and clarity, leaving the reader with a positive road to follow at its end. Thank you! Well written.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
