Fear
One day at a time44 total reviews
Comment from Santiago2
So well-crafted with the enjambment and rhyme scheme. You speak pointedly to me and others of "a certain age," when a particular new pain causes concern that would have passed unnoticed in years past. Thanks for this missive so well-expressed
jon
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So well-crafted with the enjambment and rhyme scheme. You speak pointedly to me and others of "a certain age," when a particular new pain causes concern that would have passed unnoticed in years past. Thanks for this missive so well-expressed
jon
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Fear", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Fear", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from phil nelson
Another wonderful life lesson- poignant and simple but as always thought provoking and applicable to all ages. A treat to read and enjoy!
All the Best!
Phil
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Another wonderful life lesson- poignant and simple but as always thought provoking and applicable to all ages. A treat to read and enjoy!
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
We do so often live our life fearful of what may come our way and you are so right, it can destroy the quality of our lives.
A wonderful message in this outstanding and well written poem.
Blessings
Janet
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We do so often live our life fearful of what may come our way and you are so right, it can destroy the quality of our lives.
A wonderful message in this outstanding and well written poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello jaybird,
I just read a contest entry about snakes. That is one of my biggest fears. I have had vivid nightmares about snakes. So interesting to read and review that poem and then find this post about fears. I will try to remain calm and get through the rest of my day feeling brave.
Joy xx
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Hello jaybird,
I just read a contest entry about snakes. That is one of my biggest fears. I have had vivid nightmares about snakes. So interesting to read and review that poem and then find this post about fears. I will try to remain calm and get through the rest of my day feeling brave.
Joy xx
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this poem that exposes the danger of living in fear. Great job writing in this form with creativity. Keep writing good stuff! Happy October!
Bill
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I like this poem that exposes the danger of living in fear. Great job writing in this form with creativity. Keep writing good stuff! Happy October!
Bill
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding poetry, Jay, as usual from you. Your writing always carries a lesson of sorts with it. Each of them just as with this one, contains wise advice or reflection on lessons learned. Bravo, my friend. : ) Bob
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Outstanding poetry, Jay, as usual from you. Your writing always carries a lesson of sorts with it. Each of them just as with this one, contains wise advice or reflection on lessons learned. Bravo, my friend. : ) Bob
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
They say 90% of what we fear never happens. Fear has always been my biggest enemy, but I am bless to have the Lord who has all things in his hands and great friends and family to encourage me. Fear is Satan's greatest tool. We need to let the Lord wrestle it from his hands. Well done as always sir. Rox
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They say 90% of what we fear never happens. Fear has always been my biggest enemy, but I am bless to have the Lord who has all things in his hands and great friends and family to encourage me. Fear is Satan's greatest tool. We need to let the Lord wrestle it from his hands. Well done as always sir. Rox
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from papa55mike
What a terrific message the poem brings. A wonderfully written rhyme that eases the fear in our lives. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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What a terrific message the poem brings. A wonderfully written rhyme that eases the fear in our lives. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
So very true, Jay. There are many things to fear and if we let them take over it can truly overwhelm.
A fine poem written in your signature pristine metre and fresh rhymes.
A most enjoyable read this evening. :)
Gloria
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So very true, Jay. There are many things to fear and if we let them take over it can truly overwhelm.
A fine poem written in your signature pristine metre and fresh rhymes.
A most enjoyable read this evening. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
