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Not an enjoyable time of year for me.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Mary Ann McPhedran
Ah Christmas, and will soon be upon us. I like your poem it has a comic side to it. The imagery is great and it's fun to read. The poem is well structured. keep writing. Mary Ann.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
I am so pleased you found my poem worthy of such a high rating. Thank you!
Comment from
dejohnsrld (Debbie)
so much laughter, so much fun,
reminds me how I myself have none.
Just memories of what used to be
when happy I was, with him and me.
On Christmas Day he went away.
So now I'm a grinch; that's all I'll say. (capitalize Grinch)
This is a cute poem. I am a Christmas Grinch these days. The whole meaning of Christmas has been lost. And why are they selling Christmas trees before Halloween? Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
Christmas is so exploited into a shopping frenzy these days, I really do dislike it, but if that's how people want to have their fun, let them ? I'll just go hide out somewhere peaceful.
Thanks for pointing out the omission of cap 'G'.
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