No Time for Me!
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "When Life was Young"A Collection of Pain.
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I hold to the knowledge that in the end, God's love will win out which is what has always seen me through the tragedies of this life. Well done and than you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I hold to the knowledge that in the end, God's love will win out which is what has always seen me through the tragedies of this life. Well done and than you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thanks Mystic Angel and have an Angelic Day.
Ricky
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Doctor Ricky! I read this and though you wrote is as non-fiction prose, it really reads more like a poem. I sense that the events of 9/11 had a tremendous impact on your life.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Hi Doctor Ricky! I read this and though you wrote is as non-fiction prose, it really reads more like a poem. I sense that the events of 9/11 had a tremendous impact on your life.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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An impacted me about as much as anybody from a distance that was watching the horrible events.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I enjoy each stanza on their own, I'm not quite sure what to make of them together. I especially enjoyed the last stanza, darkness coming from evil and hate and not the dimming of the stars.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I enjoy each stanza on their own, I'm not quite sure what to make of them together. I especially enjoyed the last stanza, darkness coming from evil and hate and not the dimming of the stars.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Your welcome.
Follow me?
You'll be surprised.
Doctor Ricky....
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Ah, you teaser, I might have to do that.
Comment from David R. Davis
Powerful words you write. We are moving or perhaps have already moved into a darker period of history. I am troubled by what I see and hear. There is blame enough to spread to all and still I think (maybe hope) that there is still time to turn things around. Perhaps we need to slow down, listen to each other, work to reduce our hate and blame and find compassion for others. You are probably aware there are a couple of spelling or typing errors in the piece. "bBabies" and "Will Eaths woes..." Nicely done, Go well.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Powerful words you write. We are moving or perhaps have already moved into a darker period of history. I am troubled by what I see and hear. There is blame enough to spread to all and still I think (maybe hope) that there is still time to turn things around. Perhaps we need to slow down, listen to each other, work to reduce our hate and blame and find compassion for others. You are probably aware there are a couple of spelling or typing errors in the piece. "bBabies" and "Will Eaths woes..." Nicely done, Go well.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Dihalia
"The Earth spun not an the Angels cried."
"The Earth spun and now the Angels cried."
Hi, your writing was interesting. These are some of the suggestions:
"Flowers died, bBabies cried and addicts tried."
"Flowers died, Babies cried and addicts tried."
"Will Sin and Evil win or do we have still a chance?"
"Will Sin and Evil win or do we still have a chance?"
"Will Eaths woes dissapate and disperse or will the Sun and Moon shed more Gloom?"
"Will Earth's woes dissapate and disperse or will the Sun and Moon shed more Gloom?"
Keep writing.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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"The Earth spun not an the Angels cried."
"The Earth spun and now the Angels cried."
Hi, your writing was interesting. These are some of the suggestions:
"Flowers died, bBabies cried and addicts tried."
"Flowers died, Babies cried and addicts tried."
"Will Sin and Evil win or do we have still a chance?"
"Will Sin and Evil win or do we still have a chance?"
"Will Eaths woes dissapate and disperse or will the Sun and Moon shed more Gloom?"
"Will Earth's woes dissapate and disperse or will the Sun and Moon shed more Gloom?"
Keep writing.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Your welcome!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This short piece poses the question of what will become of planet earth. Although the ancient times discussed are pre-politics the modern reader can't help but think of how the way we are abusing our planet could cause our destruction. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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This short piece poses the question of what will become of planet earth. Although the ancient times discussed are pre-politics the modern reader can't help but think of how the way we are abusing our planet could cause our destruction. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thanks and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Nowhereman1
Interesting chapter. The structure of the poem was a little unusual and a little hard to follow, but i did enjoy reading it and thank you for sharing this part of your book
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Interesting chapter. The structure of the poem was a little unusual and a little hard to follow, but i did enjoy reading it and thank you for sharing this part of your book
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
