Burden Bear
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a wonderful offering for the Love Poem Contest -- just precious and perfect for those children who have special animals or blankets (or both!) that give them that sense of being loved!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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What a wonderful offering for the Love Poem Contest -- just precious and perfect for those children who have special animals or blankets (or both!) that give them that sense of being loved!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Hello Yvette, A lovely French name you have. Thanks for reading and your good wishes. blessings, Kace.
Comment from Sasha
I love the idea of a burden bear, I will have to look for one for me to use. This is beautifully written and sends such a positive and inspiring message, thanks so much for sharing it with us. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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I love the idea of a burden bear, I will have to look for one for me to use. This is beautifully written and sends such a positive and inspiring message, thanks so much for sharing it with us. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Hi Sasha, I'm a bit shell-shocked at the moment, had the funeral last Wednesday. I believe in reincarnation. Thanks for reading my friend. Love, Kace.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
My deepest sympathy for your recent loss. This is beautifully penned and expresses the treasure such touchstones become throughout our lives wonderfully. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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My deepest sympathy for your recent loss. This is beautifully penned and expresses the treasure such touchstones become throughout our lives wonderfully. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Hello my dear friend, Thank you for your kind wishes and I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem sweetie-pie. Love, Kace.
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest Kace. This was very good. I do so enjoy the concept of the Burden Bear, I have heard of them being called various things over the years. Easy to read and a nice rhyme pattern.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Good luck in the contest Kace. This was very good. I do so enjoy the concept of the Burden Bear, I have heard of them being called various things over the years. Easy to read and a nice rhyme pattern.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Hello my dear friend, Thanks so much for reading and glad you liked the concept. I had the funeral last Wed. still a bit shell-shocked at present. Love, Kace XX
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You are so welcome Kace, I do so hate to be nosey but was this the reason for the Burden Bear poem? If so please take care of yourself.
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If you had read my author's notes, my partner died on 1/10. I wanted to share a poem for others that are hurting. Love, Kace XX
Comment from PoemsOfDD
K, I am so very sorry to learn you have lost your long time partner. My thoughts are with you.
I am sure your Burden Bear will be of great comfort during those quiet moments of reflection. Hug it tight and take one day at a time. ~DDxx
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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K, I am so very sorry to learn you have lost your long time partner. My thoughts are with you.
I am sure your Burden Bear will be of great comfort during those quiet moments of reflection. Hug it tight and take one day at a time. ~DDxx
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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DD, Thanks so much for your kind words of comfort. I didn't think I could write anything this week - bear had another idea. Love, K.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kace, this is such a lovely poem and a good entry to the contest. Well written with good abcb rhyme form. I am very sad for you - I have read your notes. Sorry to hear you have lost your partner of 30 years. My thoughts are with you - take care and try to keep smiling. Warm regards Dorothy xx
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Hi Kace, this is such a lovely poem and a good entry to the contest. Well written with good abcb rhyme form. I am very sad for you - I have read your notes. Sorry to hear you have lost your partner of 30 years. My thoughts are with you - take care and try to keep smiling. Warm regards Dorothy xx
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
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Hi Dorothy, I'm a little lonely, not sad because the burden and suffering has gone. The Lord has her in His keeping now. Much love, Kace.
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Hi Kace, I feel sorry for you that your loss has made you so lonely. It is only natural when you have had someone with you for 30 years. You need to look to outside interests - not easy, but worth a try. Do you have family near? God Bless you - love Dorothy x
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Hello Dorothy, It's only early days, I have no family my friend. My toby-dog tries his best to keep me up and going. I'm not depressed because my friend was suffering terribly and she was my carer. In the last five years, the roles reversed and I (in my electric wheelchair) was caring for her. She had given up on all the drugs etc. Rheumatoid arthritis is an insidious disease my friend. If I could, I would live in UK that is where my heart is. Love, Kace.
Comment from Janetsue
I am so sorry to hear about the recent loss of your loved one, Kace. I Wish I had a six for this poem of comfort written straight from your heart. The little bear is precious and just begs to be cuddled. The roads of life are full of some pretty big pits. It helps to remember that we are not encountering them alone because the Lord is right there along with us. I'm thinking about that wonderful poem FOOTPRINTS and how we are carried through the dark times. Now you've given others an additional beautiful image to cherish--that of also holding onto a sweet burden bear as tears are falling. xoxo Janet
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I am so sorry to hear about the recent loss of your loved one, Kace. I Wish I had a six for this poem of comfort written straight from your heart. The little bear is precious and just begs to be cuddled. The roads of life are full of some pretty big pits. It helps to remember that we are not encountering them alone because the Lord is right there along with us. I'm thinking about that wonderful poem FOOTPRINTS and how we are carried through the dark times. Now you've given others an additional beautiful image to cherish--that of also holding onto a sweet burden bear as tears are falling. xoxo Janet
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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FOOTPRINTS inspired me many years ago and remains in my heart. We are all here to learn, her suffering was dreadful and pulling me down. Now she is with the Lord, lonely me, I will bounce back! Much love, Kace.
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You are truly in my prayers, Kace. xoxo
