Comment from patricia dillon

Average

A stark contrast. We should all reflect on the Four Last Things from time to time. Even if you do not believe in an afterlife, it is useful to examine your conscience.

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This poem speaks Heaven Gate is open with vetting for eternal grace while Hell has open borders; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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Comment from Chelle_GH

Excellent

It is truly my pleasure to read this. Three liners yet with strong impact and the image matched perfectly. No wonder that this is an All Time Best!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Dan Pald why haven't you posted my site anymore? Love your fairies. Your poem is so spiritual and so glorious and are you well? Please message me.lolol liberty justice www.libertyjustice
books.com

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019

I am doing fine just not with the urge to write as I had before. Working and enjoying life is my goal now. Merry Christmas.

reply by Liberty Justice on 28-Dec-2019

I miss your delightful fairies. wwww.libertyjusticebooks.com

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Pithy and sardonic and socially relevant with such brevity and yet such wisdom packed tightly! It occurs to me that people may well interpret it the way they have leaned politically over these past three years... Poetry, well written, can be like that.--Karenina

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Yes hell does have open borders, I like the message in here telling us to always do what is right as the option is not a good one, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Danpald,
This could be interpreted in so many ways but your last line has me thinking about the present political climate.
I will hang back on my political views and congratulate you on penning a
thought provoking poem.
Well done.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I love the picture of the golden gates. The picture of hell is another story. It makes us realize what it'll be like if we don't enter the eternal gates. it's a good reminder. Thank you.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words were clear, descriptive, strong and creative.
I pondered on the last line. The artwork is perfect and compliments
both the theme and words of this poem well.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

You have poetically presented a significantly valid spiritual message in brevity. The visual art selection is well enhancing.
Very nice work overall, I enjoyed this read,

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019

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