No Time for Me!
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Clock with the Misery Hands"A Collection of Pain.
5 total reviews
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Ricky, I'm amazed at the way you can write in so many different ways and forms the story of your son and wife's deaths. I'm glad four others are alive because of your son Jason and his organs. cleo 85 gives me good pictures too, in a lot of my poems. Donna
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Dear Ricky, I'm amazed at the way you can write in so many different ways and forms the story of your son and wife's deaths. I'm glad four others are alive because of your son Jason and his organs. cleo 85 gives me good pictures too, in a lot of my poems. Donna
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks Donna.
Grief and Pain?
Misery and Dear?
Depression and Suicidal thoughts?
All must be challenged when severity comes To Your Town.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Just when I begin to think I have this whole sad saga memorized from reading it so many times - you introduce a new tidbit or a different version. I guess this proves that the mind withholds information from severe traumas until the psyche can handle it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Just when I begin to think I have this whole sad saga memorized from reading it so many times - you introduce a new tidbit or a different version. I guess this proves that the mind withholds information from severe traumas until the psyche can handle it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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The Story that night was so intensive... Slowly, it's not that I don't remember but I introduce...
A new segment when I decide to write another piece.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
other's lives
and for my wife's
An excellent piece on the complete story of the lives and tying them all together for us to understand. There is no total recovery, just trying to reach others
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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other's lives
and for my wife's
An excellent piece on the complete story of the lives and tying them all together for us to understand. There is no total recovery, just trying to reach others
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks Barb as you well know with your losses.
Ricky
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is another powerful introspective/retrospective from you. You're words are laced with emotional compassion (thumbs up}.
Here are three standouts for me:
"There once was a Watch that could tell the Time."
"A long, long, TIME ago." -- I like how you play with the word "time" here {smiles}.
"And, those whom watched that Watch... -- And again {smiles}. You're playing with the word "watch".
"If you know anybody suffering like my wife Carolyn please call... / 9-11 immediately.' -- This is poignant {thumbs up}.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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This is another powerful introspective/retrospective from you. You're words are laced with emotional compassion (thumbs up}.
Here are three standouts for me:
"There once was a Watch that could tell the Time."
"A long, long, TIME ago." -- I like how you play with the word "time" here {smiles}.
"And, those whom watched that Watch... -- And again {smiles}. You're playing with the word "watch".
"If you know anybody suffering like my wife Carolyn please call... / 9-11 immediately.' -- This is poignant {thumbs up}.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks Alex for your Excellent and Intensive Review.
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As you relive these tragic events here Ricky, the torture of the situation never goes away. I thought your title appropriate and would suggest it should read: "The Clock with Misery Hands". taking out (the), this is a sad recollection, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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As you relive these tragic events here Ricky, the torture of the situation never goes away. I thought your title appropriate and would suggest it should read: "The Clock with Misery Hands". taking out (the), this is a sad recollection, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks Dolly.
I changed the Title.
Yours was much better!
Ricky
