My Beloved Dog
My time with my former pet dog.15 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Troy sounds like a special dog. I would have liked to have heard some of what you included in the author notes in the story, and less about your other dogs. It's unclear in the story what happened to Troy, almost as if he was too wild to keep. It's hard when you fall in love with a pet and t hen circumstances demand that you part.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Troy sounds like a special dog. I would have liked to have heard some of what you included in the author notes in the story, and less about your other dogs. It's unclear in the story what happened to Troy, almost as if he was too wild to keep. It's hard when you fall in love with a pet and t hen circumstances demand that you part.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a sweet memory of your beloved dog, Troy. It's well-written, interesting. I could feel the love, admiration you have for him. Glad that he found the love that he deserves with you and the neighbor. Labs can be a handful when they're a puppy, but they usually calm down when they're around two. Then they are the best dogs ever. Very loving, loyal and smart. I have 4. Three older,1 pup. Puppers keeps everyone on their toes, lol.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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This is a sweet memory of your beloved dog, Troy. It's well-written, interesting. I could feel the love, admiration you have for him. Glad that he found the love that he deserves with you and the neighbor. Labs can be a handful when they're a puppy, but they usually calm down when they're around two. Then they are the best dogs ever. Very loving, loyal and smart. I have 4. Three older,1 pup. Puppers keeps everyone on their toes, lol.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from tim dodd
Sounds like Troy found a good friend
when he met you. Love your dog essay.
Sounds like he wanted to be free. He
was free when you found him. Maybe he escaped
and hurt his tale when he did. I hope he had a good
life. Dogs are hard to keep happy in my experience.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Sounds like Troy found a good friend
when he met you. Love your dog essay.
Sounds like he wanted to be free. He
was free when you found him. Maybe he escaped
and hurt his tale when he did. I hope he had a good
life. Dogs are hard to keep happy in my experience.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Thanks! He was a good friend. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Friday Raul1. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Happy Friday Raul1. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I haven't won anything, but thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from JLR
A lovely dog photo, clearly shows a pet that is quite well loved. Those penetration brown eyes penetrate when your gaze into them. Thank you for your wonderful entry Good success
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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A lovely dog photo, clearly shows a pet that is quite well loved. Those penetration brown eyes penetrate when your gaze into them. Thank you for your wonderful entry Good success
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from MT Laws
These are memories to cherish forever. The inclusion of details in your first paragraph really highlight the dog's attitude and, even more, your loving attention paid to him. I would suggest revising the last sentence of your second paragraph, for clarity. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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These are memories to cherish forever. The inclusion of details in your first paragraph really highlight the dog's attitude and, even more, your loving attention paid to him. I would suggest revising the last sentence of your second paragraph, for clarity. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I will fix the mistake.
Comment from sunnilicious
Sorry to hear about your pet dog. This was a nice story. Good visual imagery. Creative. Sad to hear he was abused. But glad he finally found loving homes. Nice work
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Sorry to hear about your pet dog. This was a nice story. Good visual imagery. Creative. Sad to hear he was abused. But glad he finally found loving homes. Nice work
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you! He was a good dog, but I am glad you understand why he was wild and scared. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I did enjoy reading it and the story itself. However, if you plan to do anything with it, you may want to correct some grammatical errors.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I did enjoy reading it and the story itself. However, if you plan to do anything with it, you may want to correct some grammatical errors.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I will.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I had a dog that had been abused. She was afraid of men and any loud noise like thunder or fireworks. The dog I have now isn't afraid of anything. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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I had a dog that had been abused. She was afraid of men and any loud noise like thunder or fireworks. The dog I have now isn't afraid of anything. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my brief biography!
Comment from Gail Denham
I've always loved cockers - got one on my first birthday - she lived till she was 13, died on Easter - we buried her out back. Since then, so many dogs have come and gone. But one black cocker we got was rather unruly. We finally gave him away to a farmer where he could roam. At Christmas we got a card from the dog (penned by the farmer) "I've been on ok dog, but I did bite the mailman once - and wandered into a neighbor's yard." Black Bart we called him. Guess the farmer kept him.
Good job on your story.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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I've always loved cockers - got one on my first birthday - she lived till she was 13, died on Easter - we buried her out back. Since then, so many dogs have come and gone. But one black cocker we got was rather unruly. We finally gave him away to a farmer where he could roam. At Christmas we got a card from the dog (penned by the farmer) "I've been on ok dog, but I did bite the mailman once - and wandered into a neighbor's yard." Black Bart we called him. Guess the farmer kept him.
Good job on your story.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
