No time like the present
we can start by listening31 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
It seems nothing gets done until things really get bad so I understand what you're saying here. And yes, people are always quick to find someone else to blame for whatever bad is happening.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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It seems nothing gets done until things really get bad so I understand what you're saying here. And yes, people are always quick to find someone else to blame for whatever bad is happening.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Judy, for your insightful comments. I am glad you agree with the premise.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Ogden
It's unfortunate our closed-minded politicians can't think that way. Jesse, I think your poem is eloquent, though simply put, a very effective writing style.
Don
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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It's unfortunate our closed-minded politicians can't think that way. Jesse, I think your poem is eloquent, though simply put, a very effective writing style.
Don
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Don, for your perspective on our politicians. I agree. I appreciate, very much, the exceptional rating. Thank you for your kind comments about my writing style. Have a great weekend.
Take care, Jesse
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You're still very welcome, Jesse.You have an enjoyable weekend, too.
Don
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"No time like the present", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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"No time like the present", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your rave review of my work. Your descriptions of it are very kind. Have a nice day/night.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your balanced approach to problem-solving and the progression you used in these tercets to describe how we can start listening. Here's to change! Since I don't have six stars, I have added some cent pumps- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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I admired your balanced approach to problem-solving and the progression you used in these tercets to describe how we can start listening. Here's to change! Since I don't have six stars, I have added some cent pumps- Joan
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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I am humbled by your wonderful gift of the member cent pumps, as well as your ultra fine review of my work. I am happy you noticed the progression I used. I repeated several words throughout to emphasize the theme and message. I agree. Here's to change!
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Jesse. You've created a thoughtful poem reflecting on what happens when people are affected by things that are generally out of their control. The progression of more trouble leads to something like a reconciliation between hardened positions. In this day and age positions have become so hard, I wonder what they will do next. Robert
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Hello Jesse. You've created a thoughtful poem reflecting on what happens when people are affected by things that are generally out of their control. The progression of more trouble leads to something like a reconciliation between hardened positions. In this day and age positions have become so hard, I wonder what they will do next. Robert
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Hello Robert.
Thank you for your astute commentary, on what is in store for us if we don't start compromising, and listening to different points of view, other than our own. Your review is thought-provoking and insightful. Have a nice day/night.
Take care, Jesse
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You're welcome
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your poem says so much about how things go and how they should go. Listening not just with our ears but with our mind absorbing the words, we can compliment each other with support. You have it right and the picture is so in sync.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Your poem says so much about how things go and how they should go. Listening not just with our ears but with our mind absorbing the words, we can compliment each other with support. You have it right and the picture is so in sync.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful insights. Listening with our ears and mind. I am glad you thought my choice for the picture was in sync with the theme. I am happy you agree with this poem.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is moving, well-written, and realistic. You have been inclusive in your message about the paths people take when times get hard, harder, and hardest. Really hard times DO indeed bring out the best in some people; some crazy people just get crazier.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Your poem is moving, well-written, and realistic. You have been inclusive in your message about the paths people take when times get hard, harder, and hardest. Really hard times DO indeed bring out the best in some people; some crazy people just get crazier.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Janice, for your kind words and insights. Sometimes crazy people do respond poorly, yet sometimes what they need is someone to listen and to care. It depends on the individual. Thank you for being supportive. It means a lot.
Take care, Jesse
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is moving, well-written, and realistic. You have been inclusive in your message about the paths people take when times get hard, harder, and hardest. Really hard times DO indeed bring out the best in some people; some crazy people just get crazier.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Your poem is moving, well-written, and realistic. You have been inclusive in your message about the paths people take when times get hard, harder, and hardest. Really hard times DO indeed bring out the best in some people; some crazy people just get crazier.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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I notice you reviewed me twice with the same response. See the other reply to your review, please.
Jesse
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okay
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I apologize if I offended you. It was not my intention at all.
Jesse
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What? Why would I be offended?!
Somehow that review went to you twice. I don't know how.
I couldn't have written the review twice. Fan Story doesn't allow us to review a poem twice. Nevertheless, I certainly wouldn't be offended by what you said. Have a great weekend, James!
:-)
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Oh. No worries. I must have misinterpreted your reply to my reply. Sorry.
Jesse
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Jesse.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like this poem very much.
-The style is very good, and
the ideas flow smoothly.
-The opening lines of each
verse are very effective, and
each has a very good message.
-You show how people continue
to build up with hatred as times
get harder, but you shift your
focus very well with the last two verses:
"people rise together to create change."
-The last verse is very good, too.
-Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Jesse.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like this poem very much.
-The style is very good, and
the ideas flow smoothly.
-The opening lines of each
verse are very effective, and
each has a very good message.
-You show how people continue
to build up with hatred as times
get harder, but you shift your
focus very well with the last two verses:
"people rise together to create change."
-The last verse is very good, too.
-Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Pam, for your thorough and thoughtful review. You cover everything very well. I am glad you like the shift to hope for positive change in the last two verses. Thank you for your frank reaction to my poem. I am glad you liked it.
Take care, Jesse
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You are very welcome and deserving, Jesse. It was a very good poem.
Comment from royowen
It has always amazed me that in our western society we ignore one another when things are well, and yet in times of trouble they rally around to help...go figure, they flock to church, funny things people. Well done Jesse, a beautifully written poem in Free verse Triplets, well done my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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It has always amazed me that in our western society we ignore one another when things are well, and yet in times of trouble they rally around to help...go figure, they flock to church, funny things people. Well done Jesse, a beautifully written poem in Free verse Triplets, well done my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Roy, for your unique comments on how people behave. It is a funny thing, indeed. I appreciate your kind words and reflections on my poem.
Take care, Jesse
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Good job
