My Favorite Treasure
free verse3 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I am out of sixes! I think the sounds of a baby are priceless. This poem describes the treasure of a daughter's recording as a baby being found and finally given away for a twenty-first birthday gift. I would have taken it somewhere to get another recording of it as back-up. Very nice free verse poem with organized quatrains/stanzas. I think this is written from the heart and a great contest entry.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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I am out of sixes! I think the sounds of a baby are priceless. This poem describes the treasure of a daughter's recording as a baby being found and finally given away for a twenty-first birthday gift. I would have taken it somewhere to get another recording of it as back-up. Very nice free verse poem with organized quatrains/stanzas. I think this is written from the heart and a great contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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thxs so much for your awesome comments in this review. so glad you enjoyed it
Comment from JLR
Well written free verse, I learned a lot form your offering. my favorite line
this cassette will always be my heart's treasure. I have a cassette of my 97-year-old father in law answering questions about his growing up in rural Nebraska on a farm then moving to Port Angeles, WA. It is and will be a family treasure for generations
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Well written free verse, I learned a lot form your offering. my favorite line
this cassette will always be my heart's treasure. I have a cassette of my 97-year-old father in law answering questions about his growing up in rural Nebraska on a farm then moving to Port Angeles, WA. It is and will be a family treasure for generations
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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THAT'S A GREAT TREASURE TO KEEP. JUST HAVE TO HAVE A GOOD WORKING CASSETTE PLAYER. OR MAYBE TWO THXS FOR YOUR REVIEW
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent writing about your most prized possessions in your house or attic. Thanks for sharing this insight into your heart if this is a true story expressed in this poem. Thanks for sharing!
Bill
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Excellent writing about your most prized possessions in your house or attic. Thanks for sharing this insight into your heart if this is a true story expressed in this poem. Thanks for sharing!
Bill
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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All true. thxs for your review
