Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-fifty-word story, My Life Trajectory, has the proper word count and tells a story that is upbeat to begin with then slides into the pollution and war. Let's get that part about catching a plane to Mars and getting in on the ground floor of new markets there.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Just give technology a chance -- make notes about today, and ten years from now you'll laugh at your notes.... except for the wars - sad to say that's most likely not going any where...sigh. A great offering for the contest -- best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

Thanks for reading and interesting commentary zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and story.
-It is written well and
flows smoothly.
-You give very good
examples of events that
you have witnessed or known
about during your life.
-You show the amazing things
we have done, but your ending
shows the opposite side of
what we are doing to our planet.
-A good ending with the question.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019

Thanks for an encouraging review zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Oct-2019

You are quite welcome, zanya.