Windstorm
3-6-9 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
This 3-6-9-poem makes me feel the storm and rain slashing down. It roars and pours and then suddenly...clearing up and all is peaceful again.
A 3-6-9 makes lovely formatting when the text is centered. You chose well to do so. I also liked the black font and light lettering.
Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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This 3-6-9-poem makes me feel the storm and rain slashing down. It roars and pours and then suddenly...clearing up and all is peaceful again.
A 3-6-9 makes lovely formatting when the text is centered. You chose well to do so. I also liked the black font and light lettering.
Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Marjon, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
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Comment from Puzzle
The picture says it all!! How scary are those!? This is written well. I don't see any errors and I think the subject matter is unique! I enjoyed it! I hope you have some sunny days coming soon!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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The picture says it all!! How scary are those!? This is written well. I don't see any errors and I think the subject matter is unique! I enjoyed it! I hope you have some sunny days coming soon!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Puzzle, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I don't mind a good wind storm as long as it's not a tornado and is not destructive. I grew up in a state where tornadoes were a normal thing. The bad thing about them is that they don't give you much warning. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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I don't mind a good wind storm as long as it's not a tornado and is not destructive. I grew up in a state where tornadoes were a normal thing. The bad thing about them is that they don't give you much warning. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2020
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Dear Jeffrey, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from RodG
I've never experienced a Nor'easter, but this poem gives a visual picture of the storm and what it sounds like howling and "rushing throughout the town." Rod
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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I've never experienced a Nor'easter, but this poem gives a visual picture of the storm and what it sounds like howling and "rushing throughout the town." Rod
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Dear Rod, I'm glad you got the feel of my Nor'easter, thanks for your review. Dove
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this well written poem about some nasty weather in your area. It is written with a smooth flow and was enjoyable.I like this reference to the Wizard of Oz.
Bill
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Thanks for sharing this well written poem about some nasty weather in your area. It is written with a smooth flow and was enjoyable.I like this reference to the Wizard of Oz.
Bill
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your compliments, comments and review. Dove
Comment from Apriori
This is a well constructed poem that has a great flow. You have provided some super concrete images, and details that are appropriate to the themes. I also see that you have staged the events of the storm which gives the piece a wonderful architecture. Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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This is a well constructed poem that has a great flow. You have provided some super concrete images, and details that are appropriate to the themes. I also see that you have staged the events of the storm which gives the piece a wonderful architecture. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
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Dear Apryor, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very well written 3-6-9. You have used dramatic wording to describe the storm very well. We all feel like we have been there with you. Great descriptive words peppered throughout this poem. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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This is a very well written 3-6-9. You have used dramatic wording to describe the storm very well. We all feel like we have been there with you. Great descriptive words peppered throughout this poem. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Dear Melissa, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Ricky1024
"Windstorm is a 3-6-9 Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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"Windstorm is a 3-6-9 Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Dear Ricky, Thanks for your comments, compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked the breeze here, just liked Dorothy's twister! (Nice touch) I felt the threat of the storm coming Donna, a fine 3-6-9 trio, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I liked the breeze here, just liked Dorothy's twister! (Nice touch) I felt the threat of the storm coming Donna, a fine 3-6-9 trio, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your comments, compliments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I have enjoyed reading this poem. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! I have enjoyed reading this poem. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Dear Raul, Thank you for your comments, compliments, and good luck wishes. Dove
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You're welcome.
