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Poetry at it's finest.

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Comment from Lulube
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Rabbit Beer? Not made with rabbit pellets i hope? Just kidding you. lol You certainly are letting go of your imagination. That's great! Get your muse to venture into unknown thoughts. Strange story line, with rhyming sporadically, makes an intriguing read.

lulube

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
    Yes, I had a lot of fun with this one and thanks for enjoying it.
    Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by Lulube on 19-Oct-2019
    welcome

    lulube
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Ricky
I must say you made your poem very interesting by using the rabbit hole like Alice in wonder land gave you poem saying I"ll just take a little drink."
"Sure wish I had some Rabbit Beer!"

Gert

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Yeah that rabbit beers getting content tasty are everytime I think of it.
    maybe it's a mixture of real beer and root beer in Heaven?
    Thanks,
    Ricky
reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Oct-2019
    You are welcome Ricky
    let me know how real bear and root bee taste?
    Gert
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Kindof a more 'allusory' writing on this one, Doc -- the repeated reference to 'Rabbit Grass' I'm guessing to be an allusion to Easter morn/rebirth..? Rabbits ..... to Wonderland...? Leading to heaven with wings...
Certainly one that gets the reader's mind wandering (and wondering!) .... thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    All good thoughts and ideas that I have not pondered yet.
    I do know that we can give the rabbit a second chance on life?
    After all Babette is waiting!
    Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is well penned and a thoroughly enjoyable reading experience. Guess those blue vials can be dangerous :), much better to drink from a sparkling stream. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    This was Chapter Number One.
    Two is ready to go.
    Thanks,
    Ricky
Comment from Nowhereman1
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Very well written chapter in what seems like a very interesting book. This chapter made me interested in what was next for this story. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019

    This was Chapter One.
    Two is ready to go.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a new and original "take" on Alice in Wonderland and the concept of heaven. I found your story interesting and I enjoyed reading it. The picture you selected does much to complement the piece.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thanks.
    I just posted Chapter Number Two.
    Ricky
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thanks.
    I just posted Chapter Number Two.
    Ricky