Wendigo
The monster that is never satiated...18 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
This is definitely a strong horror poem for the contest. That picture is perfectly gruesome. I would hate to run into something like that..even if I was seeing it from a distance!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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This is definitely a strong horror poem for the contest. That picture is perfectly gruesome. I would hate to run into something like that..even if I was seeing it from a distance!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Me and you both! I live in the Great Lakes region so I think I?ll be staying indoors a whole lot more! Haha! Appreciate your feedback on this! xoxo
Comment from the13thpoet
A Terrific Thursday morning to you Diana. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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A Terrific Thursday morning to you Diana. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I appreciate did you stop to read it! This genre is a little new for me but I?m enjoying it! xoxo
Comment from LyndaS
Love your brain, girlfriend! This creeped me out. I found touring this little nugget of your mind most rewarding. LOL Great job nailing the parameters of this contest. Killer art. Yeah, this thing just drips horror. Well done, Sista!! Lynda
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Love your brain, girlfriend! This creeped me out. I found touring this little nugget of your mind most rewarding. LOL Great job nailing the parameters of this contest. Killer art. Yeah, this thing just drips horror. Well done, Sista!! Lynda
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thanks my sista! You know I live in the Great Lakes area, so I don?t go outdoors much! Haha!!! Appreciate you can appreciate!! xoxo
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Where in the Great Lakes? I'm from northern Illinois. Migrated to Florida six years ago. Ain't never going back. lol
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Almost state line with Michigan about 1 hour east of Chicago in Indiana! Where in No. Illinois? I?d be out of here too if I didn?t have so many children grandchildren and great grandchildren! Ha!
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Wisconsin state line about an hour north of Chicago. It was hard to leave the kids and grandkids but trust me, you get over it. I visit and text enough not to feel guilty. LOL! Plus they come down here as well. Great grandchildren? Wow!!
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hahaha!! hmmm... well, i don't retire for a while, but maybe i'll have to make a trip to FL. My twin grandkids liver near Ft Myers area. Just hard to get a break to go there and their momma is a little distant. We just got our first visit 2 months ago after 2 years. She has issue with my son and takes it out on all of us sadly.
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I have twin 14-year old granddaughters. They are fun.
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Love them twins :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Diana. That's a mighty ugly looking thing that looks like half dear, half goat. I've never heard of that thing and I hope I never see the picture again either. It's a nasty looking little bugger. You did a great job telling that story in 13 words. The story is very well done. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Hello Diana. That's a mighty ugly looking thing that looks like half dear, half goat. I've never heard of that thing and I hope I never see the picture again either. It's a nasty looking little bugger. You did a great job telling that story in 13 words. The story is very well done. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thanks Robert! I live in the Great Lakes area so I stay inside a lot!! Haha! Appreciate you could get past the pic to read! xoxo
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You're welcome. That thing's ugly.
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LoL!!!
Comment from LisaMay
You are certainly a woman of contrasts, Diana! Nice romantic poetry with peace and light one minute, and the next you are releasing evil bloodthirsty voracious critters onto us! I'm all right with the sounds - they weren't particularly frightening, but that image is ghastly.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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You are certainly a woman of contrasts, Diana! Nice romantic poetry with peace and light one minute, and the next you are releasing evil bloodthirsty voracious critters onto us! I'm all right with the sounds - they weren't particularly frightening, but that image is ghastly.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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LoL! You know I live in the Great Lakes area so I stay indoors a lot!! Something about Dean Kuch that drew me in to this genre and opened up another part of my imagination! Glad you got past the pic and read the poem! xoxo
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Dean was a special guy - I read everything he wrote too. Just for balance to the dark and the light, and to scare myself a bit.
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He certainly was xoxo
Comment from Alex Rosel
I like this. It's a good entry for the contest. Perhaps nothing can tap into human nightmares more than the thought of being eaten alive.
Your presentation uses the classic colors of horror -- black and red {smiles}.
Thank you for the author notes. I've never heard of Wendigos before, but your notes makes everything clear {thumbs up}.
Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I like this. It's a good entry for the contest. Perhaps nothing can tap into human nightmares more than the thought of being eaten alive.
Your presentation uses the classic colors of horror -- black and red {smiles}.
Thank you for the author notes. I've never heard of Wendigos before, but your notes makes everything clear {thumbs up}.
Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much! This is a new genre for me. I live in the Great Lakes area so I stay indoors a lot! Haha! :) xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my! And I thought "wendigo" sounded like a beautiful color - like the indigo of the rainbow mixing with the color of wind! But your monster is quite the scary thing with eating on its mind (devour, consuming)! Best wishes in the contest!
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Oh my! And I thought "wendigo" sounded like a beautiful color - like the indigo of the rainbow mixing with the color of wind! But your monster is quite the scary thing with eating on its mind (devour, consuming)! Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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LoL! Yeah the only color going on is Red!! Thank much for reading! I live in the Great Lakes area so I stay inside a lot! :) ha! xoxo
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Scary definition in a quatrain, rhymed. I was also looking up original monster names today for a decorating theme. Had not arrived at this one, though. Sounds particularly gruesome if humans are on the menu! Timely read for this time of year.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Scary definition in a quatrain, rhymed. I was also looking up original monster names today for a decorating theme. Had not arrived at this one, though. Sounds particularly gruesome if humans are on the menu! Timely read for this time of year.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading! This monster is particular to the Great Lakes which is the area of the country where I live! I stay indoors a lot! Haha!! xoxo
