Wendigo
The monster that is never satiated...18 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Sooooo..... that was a pretty disgusting pic there, my lady....eeeeeewww!! But what a very cool offering for the 13-word contest... you not only managed to deliver a bit of a chill, but you got an awesome (very natural!!) rhyme in there! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck ! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Sooooo..... that was a pretty disgusting pic there, my lady....eeeeeewww!! But what a very cool offering for the 13-word contest... you not only managed to deliver a bit of a chill, but you got an awesome (very natural!!) rhyme in there! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck ! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
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Thanks again! I?m so happy you got beyond the picture and read the entry! But I knew I had to have an impact I?ve picture since the creature is so terrifying! I live in the Great Lakes area so after I read about these guys I decided I should probably stay indoors more often! LoL! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this sent shivers down my spine Diana, it is truly horror at its worst and a good entry for the contest! A terrifying creature, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Oh my goodness this sent shivers down my spine Diana, it is truly horror at its worst and a good entry for the contest! A terrifying creature, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Oh goody! My goal achieved! LoL! Thank you for getting past the picture to read! xoxo
Comment from Cindy Warren
I sure hope I don't meet one of those! It's scary, because the Natives totally believe the tales they tell. They must be based on something. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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I sure hope I don't meet one of those! It's scary, because the Natives totally believe the tales they tell. They must be based on something. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Yes, I believe they think that when the ?white? man had to deal with the winters and starvation, they became cannibals to survive which was something not seen by the native Americans as they were pretty much were prepared for the weather being indigenous to the area. But then again, sightings of many strange creatures are reported even in our day and age so one never knows! Thanks so much for reading! xoxo
Comment from Ricky1024
There was actually a movie written about this subject.
This is a "13 word horror poetry contest entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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There was actually a movie written about this subject.
This is a "13 word horror poetry contest entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this and have a great day.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
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Oh my, I didn?t know there was a movie! Not sure I would want to watch though! Yikes! I live in the Great Lakes area and it makes me want to stay indoors a bit more now! Ha! Thanks for stopping and leaving me feedback. xoxo
Comment from Cybertron1986
Oh, wow! Another creative depiction of a popular horror character! I like! I'm running out of six stars here. I need to be conservative. Your work may catch the marketing eye of industries that involve these characters of fantasy/horror, and could work in your favor. It's very good. Keep it coming!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Oh, wow! Another creative depiction of a popular horror character! I like! I'm running out of six stars here. I need to be conservative. Your work may catch the marketing eye of industries that involve these characters of fantasy/horror, and could work in your favor. It's very good. Keep it coming!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Wow! Thank you so much! I am honored by your compliment and humbled by your rating. This is kind of a new genre for me, but I?m loving it! Appreciate you enjoyed it! xoxo
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned 13 Word Poem on a clearly horrific topic. Your approach is very clever because I think Dean was the ONLY one I have ever seen use this beast - and that goes for all sites and not just this one. He'd be proud of you. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned 13 Word Poem on a clearly horrific topic. Your approach is very clever because I think Dean was the ONLY one I have ever seen use this beast - and that goes for all sites and not just this one. He'd be proud of you. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Wow! I haven't read all of Dean's work, but had no idea he wrote on this beast before. He must be visiting in spirit for sure! thanks so much for the compliment! xoxo
Comment from Mark D. R.
Diane,
I am so glad I was unaware of this wendigo creature. It just scares me to envision its voracious appetite and its menacing height.
You made good choices for your illustration, notes, and clip.
Mark
P.S. Consider using a lighter reddish color for your background and your text will increase its contrast value to the FS reader.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Diane,
I am so glad I was unaware of this wendigo creature. It just scares me to envision its voracious appetite and its menacing height.
You made good choices for your illustration, notes, and clip.
Mark
P.S. Consider using a lighter reddish color for your background and your text will increase its contrast value to the FS reader.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Oh I see here you say lighter reddish color. I?ll go check that again! Your help is so appreciated. xoxo
Comment from Sally Law
I had to give you a five and move quickly as you know this scares me to death! I guess, that's the point and you did not waste a word.
The winner I see.
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I had to give you a five and move quickly as you know this scares me to death! I guess, that's the point and you did not waste a word.
The winner I see.
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Haha! Boo! LoL your so funny! Good thing it?s all fiction my dear. Thank you for bringing a smile to my heart! xoxo
Comment from judiverse
How scary! I hadn't heard of these wendigo monsters before. As your poem indicates, they're always hungry, just like teenage boys. They're creepy because they look so thin although they seem to eat nonstop. How unfortunate they especially like to devour humans. Excellent use of rhyme. Your word count is correct, and this certainly fits the Halloween spirit. judi
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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How scary! I hadn't heard of these wendigo monsters before. As your poem indicates, they're always hungry, just like teenage boys. They're creepy because they look so thin although they seem to eat nonstop. How unfortunate they especially like to devour humans. Excellent use of rhyme. Your word count is correct, and this certainly fits the Halloween spirit. judi
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Ha! Yeah, teenage boys are definitely ravenous creatures! LoL. I live in the Great Lakes area so I stay indoors just in case a few of these are still running around! Thanks so much for taking time to read and give me such encouraging feedback! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
such an awful monster. It's amazing to read some of the monsters of years ago. Frightening creature! They look like a dinosaur or perhaps a dragon. Sure glad this animal was before our time.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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such an awful monster. It's amazing to read some of the monsters of years ago. Frightening creature! They look like a dinosaur or perhaps a dragon. Sure glad this animal was before our time.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I?m really hoping that there was no such creature myself because I live in the Great Lakes region and I hate to think this thing was roaming around where I live! i?m really hoping that there was no such creature myself because I live in the Great Lakes region and I hate to think this thing was roaming around where I live Haha! Thanks so much for taking time to read it! Your feedback is appreciated! xoxo
