Horehound Candy
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Comment from poetwatch
You stacked your poem very nicely author. Though I have not heard of horehound candy it seem, by your description, to be a sweet way to start the day. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Sweet Stack contest. Thank you for sharing your sweet tooth and throat lozenge with us.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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You stacked your poem very nicely author. Though I have not heard of horehound candy it seem, by your description, to be a sweet way to start the day. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Sweet Stack contest. Thank you for sharing your sweet tooth and throat lozenge with us.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent 5-7-5 sequence full of sweetness as memories run through my mind of that long-ago consumption I enjoyed. I haven't had any horehound candy in decades, and I think I'm going to have to take care of that lack very soon. :-)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 sequence full of sweetness as memories run through my mind of that long-ago consumption I enjoyed. I haven't had any horehound candy in decades, and I think I'm going to have to take care of that lack very soon. :-)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Spangle, thank ypu.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, delightfully-detailed poem meets the requirements of the prompt and really pleases this reader. Your candy theme is well-sustained throughout.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Your well-written, delightfully-detailed poem meets the requirements of the prompt and really pleases this reader. Your candy theme is well-sustained throughout.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Janice, thank you.
Comment from NickieT
I like this sweet stack - a candy with a purpose! I enjoy how each of your 5-7-5 builds on the previous and I like that you have chosen a more unique candy - setting your entry apart
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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I like this sweet stack - a candy with a purpose! I enjoy how each of your 5-7-5 builds on the previous and I like that you have chosen a more unique candy - setting your entry apart
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Nickie, thank you.
