Interrogation of an Innocent Man
It's always good to have an alibi.5 total reviews
Comment from Dionisios
Haha this is great! Wow you've layered in rhyming dialogue with the altered twist of the story. I was never too familiar with Peter Peter Pumpkin Eater but your story made me want to revisit the old rhyme again. It made the experience of reading your script that much better! Thank you for sharing, this is fantastic!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Haha this is great! Wow you've layered in rhyming dialogue with the altered twist of the story. I was never too familiar with Peter Peter Pumpkin Eater but your story made me want to revisit the old rhyme again. It made the experience of reading your script that much better! Thank you for sharing, this is fantastic!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from lyenochka
LOL! Very well done! I like the use of the nursery rhyme character and the fact that he just naturally rhymes in is speech! I never understood that nursery rhyme!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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LOL! Very well done! I like the use of the nursery rhyme character and the fact that he just naturally rhymes in is speech! I never understood that nursery rhyme!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
So clever to have Peter's responses all be in rhyme, just like his famous rhyme.. I thought the other references were interesting. I had to go look up Jeanie's zucchini one. We all grow up with our favorite fairy tales and nursery rhymes, it seems! Super entry.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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So clever to have Peter's responses all be in rhyme, just like his famous rhyme.. I thought the other references were interesting. I had to go look up Jeanie's zucchini one. We all grow up with our favorite fairy tales and nursery rhymes, it seems! Super entry.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Very cute. I love the way everyone's name matched it gave the world credibility. I wonder now where is his wife? Did he do the deed or did she just leave?
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Very cute. I love the way everyone's name matched it gave the world credibility. I wonder now where is his wife? Did he do the deed or did she just leave?
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Somebody had a more than enjoyable time writing this -- and it shows by making your reader laugh and enjoy right along with you! ;) :) Such a cool offering for this contest -- can't imagine another being so laced with ingenuity!! ;) :) Oh, and smiles!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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LOL! Somebody had a more than enjoyable time writing this -- and it shows by making your reader laugh and enjoy right along with you! ;) :) Such a cool offering for this contest -- can't imagine another being so laced with ingenuity!! ;) :) Oh, and smiles!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the review.
