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When can advice be trusted?

For what perils does one seek if advice we do seek?

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Comment from Raul1
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I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! I like how you expressed emotions in this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    thank you Raul.
reply by Raul1 on 14-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from royowen
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This is an excellent tyburn poem. A really good entry in this poetry contest. The rhyming is a revelation, and the whole succeeds in giving a message of not fearing words with 'ice in them. Well done, a great entry, clever and vote winning, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Roy, thank you for your kind words, which I hold I highest regard Have
    a week filled with awe and wonder.
reply by royowen on 14-Oct-2019
    Good job
Comment from humpwhistle
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Sorry, but I don't understand what you're getting at. Your title asks a question, but the poem itself is incomprehensible to me. I guess I'm missing something. The word repetition seems odd to me, too.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Lee that is,okay sometimes the message isn?t for everyone thank?s for reviewing and commenting.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Tyburn. Everyone wants to give advice that is free most of the time. We wonder sometimes if al! The advice we receive can be trusted allbtge time.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Sandra , thank you for connecting with my words.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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This is a cute little poem similar to a Tyburn, but not quite. I would advise you to check on the requirements once again...

advice and device are not descriptive words

your 4th thru 7th syllables span what your 5th thru 8th ones should...

Good luck! ;)

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Hum ,to be given advice is not descriptive....I will revisit my intended product, thank you.
Comment from Bill Pinder
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That is a very unique type of poem with a true message. It is hard to find advice that can be fully trusted, unless it comes from God. When someone breaks your trust, forget it.
Bill

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Thank you Bill..
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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The only advice I trust comes from my psychic monkey advisor. He has never let me down. This is a great contest entry and should do well in the voting booth.

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 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    My dear friend, no truer words could be written. Thanks