When can advice be trusted?
For what perils does one seek if advice we do seek?17 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
I haven't read or written a tyburn poem for awhile but know the form.
the first four lines should rhyme...
I'm Not sure about convey rhyming with ;
spinning,
telling,
saying,
not even as a slight rhyme, you might want to look at it!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I haven't read or written a tyburn poem for awhile but know the form.
the first four lines should rhyme...
I'm Not sure about convey rhyming with ;
spinning,
telling,
saying,
not even as a slight rhyme, you might want to look at it!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks I delisted and will rework
Comment from Karl Speth
Very interesting. Always learning more interesting stuff on this site. IF only I could figure out how to beat the 150 character rule as not all opinions need to be that long.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Very interesting. Always learning more interesting stuff on this site. IF only I could figure out how to beat the 150 character rule as not all opinions need to be that long.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks Karl, I have admit that 150 is at times a grind.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nicely written Tyburn poem you have penned for the contest, but you need to check that last line for syllable count please:
spinning, 2 syllables
telling, 2 syllables
This is a very well written Tyburn poem you have penned for the writing prompt. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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This is a very nicely written Tyburn poem you have penned for the contest, but you need to check that last line for syllable count please:
spinning, 2 syllables
telling, 2 syllables
This is a very well written Tyburn poem you have penned for the writing prompt. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Yeeeeee Gads.....thanks
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
You cleverly met the requirements of the contest well. I enjoyed your piece. The image and presentation worked to enhance the poem. Good luck in the contest. I think you might win. ~Brenda
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You cleverly met the requirements of the contest well. I enjoyed your piece. The image and presentation worked to enhance the poem. Good luck in the contest. I think you might win. ~Brenda
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Brenda, thank you for the positivity in your comments.
Comment from NickieT
I think that this is great entry for a very difficult prompt. You have managed to tell a little story without getting bogged down by the repetitious nature of the pattern.
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I think that this is great entry for a very difficult prompt. You have managed to tell a little story without getting bogged down by the repetitious nature of the pattern.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Nickie, thank you for your uplifting comments.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a well-written Tyburn poem with a strong message about seeking advice and choosing whether or not to follow through and acting upon it. I like the photo of the parrots together where it looks like one is whispering into the other one's ear. I wonder what advice it might be sharing? lol
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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This is a well-written Tyburn poem with a strong message about seeking advice and choosing whether or not to follow through and acting upon it. I like the photo of the parrots together where it looks like one is whispering into the other one's ear. I wonder what advice it might be sharing? lol
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for connecting with my words!
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You're truly welcome, mystery writer!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"When can advice be trusted?", is an extremely well-written piece. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"When can advice be trusted?", is an extremely well-written piece. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
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Thank you for connecting with my words...
Comment from Susan Larson
This can be so confusing, baffling, and stress producing to figure out who to believe and who to trust on any issue or decision. You capture this quandary so well with your choice of words and this poetic form.
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This can be so confusing, baffling, and stress producing to figure out who to believe and who to trust on any issue or decision. You capture this quandary so well with your choice of words and this poetic form.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Susan, thank you for connecting with words.
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Thank you Susan, I do appreciate your comments.
Comment from Gail Denham
Interesting take on this prompt - good job. Good luck in the contest. I haven't or didn't try this one - don't understand it yet. But want to research it. Thought you did a good job.
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Interesting take on this prompt - good job. Good luck in the contest. I haven't or didn't try this one - don't understand it yet. But want to research it. Thought you did a good job.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Gail, thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image for your poem.
-You have written a
very good tyburn poem
with rhyme, word choice,
and descriptive lines, too.
-I like the line about
directions being trusted,
and then you show the
opposite very well, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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-Good image for your poem.
-You have written a
very good tyburn poem
with rhyme, word choice,
and descriptive lines, too.
-I like the line about
directions being trusted,
and then you show the
opposite very well, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Pam thank you for connecting with my words.
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You are quite welcome.
