The Audience
Just remembering Dean.14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
That is interesting writing about a giant snake that devours someone's face. Is there any symbolic meaning going on here, or is it just a story to take as is about a snake?
Bill
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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That is interesting writing about a giant snake that devours someone's face. Is there any symbolic meaning going on here, or is it just a story to take as is about a snake?
Bill
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you Bill for reviewing and your interesting comments. As far as I am concerned it is just about a snake. Unless of course, you know something I don't.
Comment from royowen
If there could be a dedication to Dean Kuch, I guess it would have to be a horror story, and this one is right up there, well done just loved the suspense filled narrative, and the "crunch" at the end, well done, blessings, Roy
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If there could be a dedication to Dean Kuch, I guess it would have to be a horror story, and this one is right up there, well done just loved the suspense filled narrative, and the "crunch" at the end, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you Roy for reviewing and your kind comments. It was unusual for me to write something like this, especially since I really, really dislike snakes. Brrrr.
Comment from JP49
Well, I certainly didn't see that end coming! Brilliant. So tantalising. At first I thought the snake was going to let Timothy go but instead I could feel him coiling himself tighter and tighter and then BAM! it was over. Well done. Great choice of artwork.
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Well, I certainly didn't see that end coming! Brilliant. So tantalising. At first I thought the snake was going to let Timothy go but instead I could feel him coiling himself tighter and tighter and then BAM! it was over. Well done. Great choice of artwork.
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing, I am glad it caught your attention.
Comment from Mabaker
You get a six for suspense Alie. I wouldn't have run, I would have been too terrified to move. I dislike snakes, and heights. I totally freeze if I have to stand on a chair to change a lightbulb. Isn't it hard writing all those ssss's for the snake? Love U Anne
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You get a six for suspense Alie. I wouldn't have run, I would have been too terrified to move. I dislike snakes, and heights. I totally freeze if I have to stand on a chair to change a lightbulb. Isn't it hard writing all those ssss's for the snake? Love U Anne
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you Anne for reviewing. I actually really and I mean really dislike snakes of any kind and if I see one, I will confess it is then dead. Brrrrrr. I am not bad with heights though. I just had to remember to add the ssss's lol. Again thanks, luv u Alie.
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You are very welcome Alie
