My Fanstory Story
Poem Lesson9 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Your use of the different forms really caught my attention! ;) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Your use of the different forms really caught my attention! ;) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your feedback
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your tribute here and I have certainly learned about the many poetry forms on Fanstory and I am still continuing to learn, people are mostly helpful on here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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I enjoyed your tribute here and I have certainly learned about the many poetry forms on Fanstory and I am still continuing to learn, people are mostly helpful on here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed
Comment from sunnilicious
Hi! That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good lyrical flow with rhythm and rhymes. Creative. Good work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Hi! That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good lyrical flow with rhythm and rhymes. Creative. Good work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks a lot for your review
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-I like your poem
very much.
-It is sincere and
shows why you like FS.
-The first verse is very
good with the use of
"Was agnostic to acrostic"
and the rhyme in the last line.
-Your concluding line is very good, too.
-A good entry; good luck, and
continue to enjoy FS!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-I like your poem
very much.
-It is sincere and
shows why you like FS.
-The first verse is very
good with the use of
"Was agnostic to acrostic"
and the rhyme in the last line.
-Your concluding line is very good, too.
-A good entry; good luck, and
continue to enjoy FS!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Teri7
I enjoyed reading this poem lesson very much! I can totally relate to you about all the different forms. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you used. Thank you for sharing your story in a poem. May God bless you! Teri
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I enjoyed reading this poem lesson very much! I can totally relate to you about all the different forms. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you used. Thank you for sharing your story in a poem. May God bless you! Teri
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed
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you are so welcome!
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is true for all of us. A few have been very successful at this site, others not so but the best part. . .that I see are the prompts to expand our thinking. . .then just write about it. Sure it's nice to win a prize every now and then but my goal is just the writing. Good, bad or otherwise. :)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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This is true for all of us. A few have been very successful at this site, others not so but the best part. . .that I see are the prompts to expand our thinking. . .then just write about it. Sure it's nice to win a prize every now and then but my goal is just the writing. Good, bad or otherwise. :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed
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:)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I love, love, love that line: Was agnostic to acrostic. Sometimes we forget beginners don't feel strongly for or against something they have not heard of or tried or got feedback on before. This will help me in the future if I teach not to be discouraged if students don't seem gung-ho right away.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I love, love, love that line: Was agnostic to acrostic. Sometimes we forget beginners don't feel strongly for or against something they have not heard of or tried or got feedback on before. This will help me in the future if I teach not to be discouraged if students don't seem gung-ho right away.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review. That's actually my favourite line of the piece as well.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the FanStory experience. The most important thing that we can wish for is to become better than we were. Be willing to learn from mistakes and the path to success will be paved.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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A very well-written poem about the FanStory experience. The most important thing that we can wish for is to become better than we were. Be willing to learn from mistakes and the path to success will be paved.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your feedback. Not always an easy path but an enjoyable one.
Comment from juliaSjames
Your rhymed quatrains present eloquent testimony to the value of being a member of FanStory.
I too have learned much from exposure to different forms of poetry and prose. And many kind and expert reviewers have helped me grow as a writer.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck in the prompt.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Your rhymed quatrains present eloquent testimony to the value of being a member of FanStory.
I too have learned much from exposure to different forms of poetry and prose. And many kind and expert reviewers have helped me grow as a writer.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck in the prompt.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your review
