Autumnal treats
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Comment from l.raven
Hi JLR, one of the things I love the most about Autumn are the holidays...the smells in the stores...and the beauty of the season...love your poem...very nicely written...and I love this picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Hi JLR, one of the things I love the most about Autumn are the holidays...the smells in the stores...and the beauty of the season...love your poem...very nicely written...and I love this picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Linda, Thank you for the fine comments.
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your sooooooo welcome...always...love xxoo
Comment from Janetsue
I like this poem very much, my friend, which offers a soothing mood for readers to tune into. I don't drink coffee, but I do find tea to be as yummy. The artwork you've selected is wonderful and sets the poem up to be thoroughly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I like this poem very much, my friend, which offers a soothing mood for readers to tune into. I don't drink coffee, but I do find tea to be as yummy. The artwork you've selected is wonderful and sets the poem up to be thoroughly enjoyed.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thank you Spangle, have a marvelous week!
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You, too, JLR!!
Comment from Susan Larson
I think fall more than any other season brings to mind specific foods. But then golden cider, orange pumpkins, red apples, the color scheme of the autumn treats matches the season.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I think fall more than any other season brings to mind specific foods. But then golden cider, orange pumpkins, red apples, the color scheme of the autumn treats matches the season.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Susan, thank you!
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Susan, thank you.
Comment from Louise Michelle
You really captured the essence of autumn. Originally from N.J., I now live in the south and miss it.
I can't do anything about snowflakes, but I think I'll buy some pumpkin cake and cider. Nicely written. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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You really captured the essence of autumn. Originally from N.J., I now live in the south and miss it.
I can't do anything about snowflakes, but I think I'll buy some pumpkin cake and cider. Nicely written. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
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thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The slice of pumpkin cake sounds delightful! I think Halloween was an American invention and we now enjoy all the treats it offers. Apple spiced cider too, I enjoyed this tasty poem, my mouth is watering now, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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The slice of pumpkin cake sounds delightful! I think Halloween was an American invention and we now enjoy all the treats it offers. Apple spiced cider too, I enjoyed this tasty poem, my mouth is watering now, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
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Thank You Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing your florette! I admit though that I'm not a big fan of pumpkin but some love it. I'd go for the apple cider, though! I still have to write my florette and am learning like you.
Your florette is almost right except it has to have an internal rhyme with your third line in the 8th syllable of your last and longest line.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thanks for sharing your florette! I admit though that I'm not a big fan of pumpkin but some love it. I'd go for the apple cider, though! I still have to write my florette and am learning like you.
Your florette is almost right except it has to have an internal rhyme with your third line in the 8th syllable of your last and longest line.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thank you I will revisit
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an excellent piece. It vividly describes a peaceful, appealing scene that centers around food and drink--and so much more. Seasonal goodies are more than just goodies; they're symbols.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent piece. It vividly describes a peaceful, appealing scene that centers around food and drink--and so much more. Seasonal goodies are more than just goodies; they're symbols.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Comment from sunnilicious
Great lyrical flow. The first stanza stood apart, however, it all worked together nicely. Good rhythm and rhymes. Nice visual imagery created. Good work.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Great lyrical flow. The first stanza stood apart, however, it all worked together nicely. Good rhythm and rhymes. Nice visual imagery created. Good work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and well written Florette poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Made me want to join in on the Fall fun. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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This is a very nice and well written Florette poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Made me want to join in on the Fall fun. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you Teri
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like your florette very much. I like that you combined your fall food with the chill of winter. Your mugs of pumpkin spice and apple cider cinnamon blast need that swirling snow to be fully appreciated. In Alabama, we are lucky if Halloween night is chillier than 70 degrees. All the little children in their warm costumes are miserable in the heat.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I think I will head to Starbucks now.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I like your florette very much. I like that you combined your fall food with the chill of winter. Your mugs of pumpkin spice and apple cider cinnamon blast need that swirling snow to be fully appreciated. In Alabama, we are lucky if Halloween night is chillier than 70 degrees. All the little children in their warm costumes are miserable in the heat.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I think I will head to Starbucks now.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks Debbie do understand your weather issue, I good friends live in the Birmingham area. Enjoy that latte grande?.
