Autumnal treats
What could be better than these?28 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is lovely, except for the snow! I love anything pumokin, so I'm down for that. Snow however is a different story. We just got our first dusting of snow today here in minnesota.:( Thank you for sharing.
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This is lovely, except for the snow! I love anything pumokin, so I'm down for that. Snow however is a different story. We just got our first dusting of snow today here in minnesota.:( Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Oh way to early for this southerner. We might get a dusting in January that?s enough.
Comment from Bichon
I loved how you dedicated a stanza to each meal and beverage, very neatly done. A real sense of autumn joy from your poem! Really enjoyed it, well done,
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I loved how you dedicated a stanza to each meal and beverage, very neatly done. A real sense of autumn joy from your poem! Really enjoyed it, well done,
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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I thank you very much..
Comment from Brett Matthew West
A well written, descriptive seasonal poem. Strong rhymes including "'round/bound" and "through/brew". Conveys several Autumn related scenes. Enjoyable poem.
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A well written, descriptive seasonal poem. Strong rhymes including "'round/bound" and "through/brew". Conveys several Autumn related scenes. Enjoyable poem.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from NickieT
I love what you have done with this prompt. It brings to mind such a cozy and inviting atmosphere. The transition between fall and winter - with falls treats keeping you warm against the impending cold.
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I love what you have done with this prompt. It brings to mind such a cozy and inviting atmosphere. The transition between fall and winter - with falls treats keeping you warm against the impending cold.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
Autumnal treats", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
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Autumnal treats", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you
Comment from jaded831
A truly excellent poem. I could feel the chill of autumn and taste the snow fall. You brought me into your poem, which is a mark of greatness. The picture united everything together, which complimented your work.
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A truly excellent poem. I could feel the chill of autumn and taste the snow fall. You brought me into your poem, which is a mark of greatness. The picture united everything together, which complimented your work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you, I am humbled by your six-star rating
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Florette, your presentation is great. You bring the chosen topic to life. I picked up on a few requirements of the Florette that were not met.
1. It should be written in Iambic meter
2. The fourth line of each stanza should have the 'b' rhyme on the eightth syllable of the twelve
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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A very well-written Florette, your presentation is great. You bring the chosen topic to life. I picked up on a few requirements of the Florette that were not met.
1. It should be written in Iambic meter
2. The fourth line of each stanza should have the 'b' rhyme on the eightth syllable of the twelve
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Humm. I will revisit, much to learn thanks
Comment from damommy
Sounds like a time well spent with friends and your favorite latte. I just hope you don't burn yourself carrying your mug on a walk. 8-)
This meets the challenge very well with good meter and rhyme.
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Sounds like a time well spent with friends and your favorite latte. I just hope you don't burn yourself carrying your mug on a walk. 8-)
This meets the challenge very well with good meter and rhyme.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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thanks for the nice comments.
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done for this contest. And pumpkin cake sounds good. Last evening I experimented with an apple cake, added some to the cake mix, plus spices, etc. Well, my poor cake - too much moisture - so now it may become an English Trifle.
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Well done for this contest. And pumpkin cake sounds good. Last evening I experimented with an apple cake, added some to the cake mix, plus spices, etc. Well, my poor cake - too much moisture - so now it may become an English Trifle.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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Still sounds tasty Gail.
Comment from His Grayness
I am and all my live have been an avid lover of all things AUTUMN and I want to thank and celebrate this gifted author for such a very warm and lovely gift of thought and pleasure delivered in this beautiful work so wonderfully celebrating my favorite season so full of my life's best memories! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I am and all my live have been an avid lover of all things AUTUMN and I want to thank and celebrate this gifted author for such a very warm and lovely gift of thought and pleasure delivered in this beautiful work so wonderfully celebrating my favorite season so full of my life's best memories! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
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I am humbled beyond words, HIS GRAYNESS, Vance.
