Comment from GE Parson

Excellent

Very scary! This actually happened to me. i.e. I heard some strange sound outside my bedroom window and I called my dad to see what it ws. It turned out to be just as you wrote, a loose branch being blown against my window.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Yikes. Just a little boy~ghost wanting some candy. Ha ha, thanks for the review. Cheers.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

An excellent Sedoka poem in the theme of Halloween, I love the artwork you have chosen for this work, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review kahpot. It was fun to write, cheers.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I'm sure all the little ghosts will be getting plenty of candy. And then getting all hyper and scared by branches tapping on the window. LOL Hope you have a wonderful Halloween.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thanks for the review Cindy. Just a little boy~ghost looking for candy. Happy Hallowe'en, cheers.

Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose

Excellent

You met the requirements for the contest very well. Your image is scary and yet works well with this piece. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing. ~Brenda

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review Brenda. Just a little boy~ghost looking for candy...cheers.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

You have written a very good poem. However, your font color and the background color you chose, make it difficult to read. Good luck in the contest. You should do well.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019

Thanks for the review and advice, I did change the font, thanks. Just a little boy~ghost wanting candy, cheers.