50 Years Failed Apocalyptic BS
In real life, not extrapolated theory, I don't see seas rise3 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I saw this in the booth and your title grabbed my attention. I love your introductory argument. It's TRUE. Why aren't beach front property worthless? Great writing. One spelling error. Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I saw this in the booth and your title grabbed my attention. I love your introductory argument. It's TRUE. Why aren't beach front property worthless? Great writing. One spelling error. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your reminder! I added the point about the Obama's purchase of a $14 MILLION beachfront on Martha's Vineyard. What do they REALLY think about global warming?
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Humane thoughts about humanity and civilization, humans neither caused Ice Age, nor warming glaciers; weather happens, climate evolves; Americans should keep America Great faith and act; well said, well done.
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Humane thoughts about humanity and civilization, humans neither caused Ice Age, nor warming glaciers; weather happens, climate evolves; Americans should keep America Great faith and act; well said, well done.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your thoughtful review. Let's Keep America Great!
Comment from Alex Rosel
Hi,
In general, I liked reading this post. It has attitude {smiles}.
I make no judgement on the merits or otherwise of the content. Instead, here are a couple of points which address writing points that you may or may not like to consider:
He pointed to the "1620" chiseled on the dry Rock and was quite sure it had not been moved since the Pilgrims landed, so why would I ask such a question?! -- If this was mine, I'd replace the comma after "landed" with a period. I'm not a fan of the interbang either. As a general rule, I avoid exclamation marks; they're sort of akin to laughing at your own joke. Finally, I wouldn't use the question mark punctuation here in this context either. Reading the next sentence, I see the "question" is really a statement.
Let the protests for clean air and water begin at the embassies of China, Russia, India and Indonesia -- our American pollution does not begin to equal! -- Statements like this are all the more authoritative if a reference to supporting peer-reviewed academic work is given. If this was mine, I'd reword it to clearly demonstrate this is an expression of personal opinion.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Hi,
In general, I liked reading this post. It has attitude {smiles}.
I make no judgement on the merits or otherwise of the content. Instead, here are a couple of points which address writing points that you may or may not like to consider:
He pointed to the "1620" chiseled on the dry Rock and was quite sure it had not been moved since the Pilgrims landed, so why would I ask such a question?! -- If this was mine, I'd replace the comma after "landed" with a period. I'm not a fan of the interbang either. As a general rule, I avoid exclamation marks; they're sort of akin to laughing at your own joke. Finally, I wouldn't use the question mark punctuation here in this context either. Reading the next sentence, I see the "question" is really a statement.
Let the protests for clean air and water begin at the embassies of China, Russia, India and Indonesia -- our American pollution does not begin to equal! -- Statements like this are all the more authoritative if a reference to supporting peer-reviewed academic work is given. If this was mine, I'd reword it to clearly demonstrate this is an expression of personal opinion.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your thoughtful review. However, I think and speak in exclamation points - it is the nature of Deplorables to be exclamative!
My career took me all over the world including India, Indonesia and many other Asian and Arab armpits. These liberals and millennials should have to go see what the rest of the world looks like, smells like and breathes like! This prompt asked for my opinion and I gave it.
