New Friends, Challenges and Fun
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Such a lovely collection of rhythmic quatrains and fun rhymes! ;) :) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Such a lovely collection of rhythmic quatrains and fun rhymes! ;) :) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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thanks, Yvette. Did you create this one?
Comment from sunnilicious
Hi! That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Creative. Good work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Hi! That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good lyrical flow of rhythm and rhymes. Creative. Good work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Comment from Raul1
This shows that you have a deep appreciation of FanStory. It is great that you feel this way about this site. It helps us all writers to be better. Your poem is very creative. Good luck in the writing prompt contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This shows that you have a deep appreciation of FanStory. It is great that you feel this way about this site. It helps us all writers to be better. Your poem is very creative. Good luck in the writing prompt contest!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Raul, for your kind words and good wishes!
I think there's probably no other sight where people from all over the world can get together by the written word and enjoy each other's work and conversations. I think it's a blast!
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your composition on FS is right on the money. I find that the first thing I think of when I sit at my computer, is FanStory and I cannot wait to see what is waiting for me. It is a blast and your words mirror a lot of my thoughts. Great picture!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Your composition on FS is right on the money. I find that the first thing I think of when I sit at my computer, is FanStory and I cannot wait to see what is waiting for me. It is a blast and your words mirror a lot of my thoughts. Great picture!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thank you so much. Sometimes it takes up whole days. (and half the night, when I'm on a roll.)
Well, I'd better pry myself from this chair and hie myself to the grocery story.
Many thanks again.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I think you capture very well the essence of Fan Story right over here :"Writers all over the globe,
From places that I'll never see,
Have offered their stories, their poems
And comments to FS, which enabled me" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I think you capture very well the essence of Fan Story right over here :"Writers all over the globe,
From places that I'll never see,
Have offered their stories, their poems
And comments to FS, which enabled me" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thank you. your comments are appreciated.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I really like your artwork;
it fits FS very well.
-I like your poem very much, too.
-It shows your enthusiasm
for the site, the people, and writing.
-It flows effortlessly with
good meter and rhyme.
-I like "beehive of ideas"
and "plethora of panaceas!"
-A good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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-I really like your artwork;
it fits FS very well.
-I like your poem very much, too.
-It shows your enthusiasm
for the site, the people, and writing.
-It flows effortlessly with
good meter and rhyme.
-I like "beehive of ideas"
and "plethora of panaceas!"
-A good conclusion, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thanks, Pam. much appreciated.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
As another who has been hooked on the place for four and half years now I tend to agree with sentiments lying behind this poem. Written in a kind of 'formule libre' this is not free verse, as it has has a regular abcb rhyme scheme. Its varying line length frees it from a descriptive metre although it has a distinctive bias towards an overall anapaestic rhythm, which is refreshing to say the least.
An enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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As another who has been hooked on the place for four and half years now I tend to agree with sentiments lying behind this poem. Written in a kind of 'formule libre' this is not free verse, as it has has a regular abcb rhyme scheme. Its varying line length frees it from a descriptive metre although it has a distinctive bias towards an overall anapaestic rhythm, which is refreshing to say the least.
An enjoyable read.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thank you. some of that was over my head, but I still thank you.
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a lovely poem, detailing what you like about the FanStory experience.
I particularly like your description that FanStory is "a beehive of ideas". This harks back to the popular saying "buzzing with ideas". That's neatly crafted {smiles}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is a lovely poem, detailing what you like about the FanStory experience.
I particularly like your description that FanStory is "a beehive of ideas". This harks back to the popular saying "buzzing with ideas". That's neatly crafted {smiles}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thanks, Alex. much appreciated!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun and positive write about Fanstory and how it has benefited people by joining. I feel the same and you included some worth while reasons here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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A fun and positive write about Fanstory and how it has benefited people by joining. I feel the same and you included some worth while reasons here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thanks, Dolly! and I like your new picture - except it doesn't show an up-close of your pretty face.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent entry for the contest with a good rhyme scheme. The thing that really comes through is your enthusiasm for the site. Also the picture is a great addition!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent entry for the contest with a good rhyme scheme. The thing that really comes through is your enthusiasm for the site. Also the picture is a great addition!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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thank you! I do think it's fun with all the neat members. I find I spend more time writing for Fan Story than I do on my book.
