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FanStory University

The wellspring that flows into a writer paradise.

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a very cool offering for this unique contest -- have so enjoyed reading all of the entries and the different stories!! ;) :) Your unique stack of nonets is awesome!! ;) Thank you for sharing yours and best of luck in the contest! ;) :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    I am very humbled, by your kind comments, which I hold in highest regard.
Comment from Louise Michelle
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What a lovely tribute to Fan Story. I'm so glad you're getting a lot out of it. What I like best is meeting people from around the globe.

You did a top notch job with your presentation. The layout was pleasing and your words filled with kindness. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    thank you.
Comment from sunnilicious
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Hi! That was a nice poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good nonet suite. Creative. Detailed. Nice work. Good luck at college. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Thank you
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Fanstory University", is quite a well-written and entertaining piece. Re-reading and re-writing though, is never wasted. Good luck and keep writing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you and yes I welcome this very valued insight
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is a nice tribute to this site and to all of the members both past and present. The leadership which has kept this site going needs to be commended. This will draw the readers in because they will agree with what you have written. If not, they would n longer be here. The reader will be invited to reflect on what this site and the member on it have done to improve their writing. I can see how much my writing has improved since receiving supportive reviews and learning by reading other great writing from members. Thank you.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you Liz, written from my heart.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I've discovered from my short time being here that there are many very talented and friendly people here to learn from and communicate with. The many that I've encountered are eager to help, encourage and mentor. I like this well thought out and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you Jeffrey, you my friend, are among those you so eloquently describe, have a superior weekend.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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Thank you for sharing your enthusiasm for this site in the form of a poem, as outlined in the writing prompt. The idea of it as a University is a novel one, and the picture works well with it.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thanks Susan, truly words from the heart.ll
Comment from Bichon
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Aww, a very heartfelt and sweet poem that made me smile while reading it. It truly is such a helpful website. Just a heads up, the characters in the poems description have graffitied a bit with the typing!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Those pesky little fuzzballs. thanks, I got them.
Comment from Joy Graham
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Hello Mystery Poet,

You caught my interest with your title. I never thought of it as a University, but that is a good comparison :) I have done a lot of learning here. I hope some day I will graduate to being a real poet and writer.

Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thanks Joy, what a great place to find your gifted voice of words.
Comment from estory
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I'm a big believer in form as a framework for theme, so I would encourage you to think of forms like this, spiraling in on themselves into a single point, and building a theme around them. the key is to come up with singular words at the end and I think you did that in a couple of places. It's great to explore new forms and I would say 'read read read' and explore. What poets do you read? estory

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    thank you and that is why I am here to learn.