Plenty
a six-word poem17 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Very optimistic or very challenging for the reader as to determine-plenty of good or bad, an excellent one line poem, very well done, and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Very optimistic or very challenging for the reader as to determine-plenty of good or bad, an excellent one line poem, very well done, and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from nomi338
Any one with clear vision can see the wisdom and knowledge of that statement. However, those of us whose vision is somewhat clouded, may sit and wonder "Huh?' Pity those poor fool, for they may never see what the world clearly sees. LOL.
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Any one with clear vision can see the wisdom and knowledge of that statement. However, those of us whose vision is somewhat clouded, may sit and wonder "Huh?' Pity those poor fool, for they may never see what the world clearly sees. LOL.
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Thanks, nomi.
Comment from the13thpoet
Good Thursday morning. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the six word poem quite well. Let's hope it will be a year of plenty. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Good Thursday morning. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the six word poem quite well. Let's hope it will be a year of plenty. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks, 13.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Hmm... Despite the for the rhyming of plenty/twenty-twenty, I think they sit uneasy together. Twenty-twenty vision is associated with normal, not deviating toward the extremes. Whereas, plenty is associated with excess. That is sort of a disjoint. Just my own personal thoughts, others may not tap into the connotations I've picked up on.
{Thumbs up}.
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Hmm... Despite the for the rhyming of plenty/twenty-twenty, I think they sit uneasy together. Twenty-twenty vision is associated with normal, not deviating toward the extremes. Whereas, plenty is associated with excess. That is sort of a disjoint. Just my own personal thoughts, others may not tap into the connotations I've picked up on.
{Thumbs up}.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks for the existential view point, Alex
Comment from Pantygynt
Plenty of what will be got?
I would love to end it there but of course FanStory won't let me stop before I have one hundered and fifty characters set down.
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Plenty of what will be got?
I would love to end it there but of course FanStory won't let me stop before I have one hundered and fifty characters set down.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
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If only you enjoyed writing a lot. : )
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Haha!
Comment from LisaMay
Poetry that makes us think is worth reading, so we take pause and ponder. One might ask: Plenty of what?... an optimistic anticipation of all good things, or the worry of plenty of aggro, plenty of negativity. Twenty-twenty is good vision, so maybe you have an insight to the future, Bill, and it is looking good.
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Poetry that makes us think is worth reading, so we take pause and ponder. One might ask: Plenty of what?... an optimistic anticipation of all good things, or the worry of plenty of aggro, plenty of negativity. Twenty-twenty is good vision, so maybe you have an insight to the future, Bill, and it is looking good.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
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Good or bad, the future will arrive.
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Coming, ready or not.
Comment from Susan X Smith
I like this because it is so optimistic. Like you I am hoping for the best. You said a mouthful in only six words. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest voting.
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I like this because it is so optimistic. Like you I am hoping for the best. You said a mouthful in only six words. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest voting.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Susan.
