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scream for blood.

a 1 9 1 poem

2 total reviews 
Comment from papa55mike
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Oh, you have done it now. The NRA will not be happy. It seems like they attack anybody who wants gun control. This poem is well-written and I love the picture of the blood-red Hibiscus.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the review and warning. As Canadians, we watch with despair the stranglehold the NRA has on the commonsense solution to the gun violence epidemic. Just start with an assault weapon ban. For pointers, check out New Zealand. Cheers and peace.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a structurally sound 1-9-1 with correct line and syllable count. The content is both timely and relevant to today's increasingly violent world. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Let's start with assault weapons. Back in the day, it took minutes to load the old musket, now hundreds can be killed in the same time. And to blame mental illness on this travesty makes it even more heinous. Thanks for your review, cheers.