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Learning from our Experience

A Poem

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Comment from Ricky1024
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Your words are so pure and so true.
I've had a problem finding trust.
And, without a that.
All the Love in the World is wasted.
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
Thanks,
Ricky

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    Thank you Ricky for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from robyn corum
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Dolly,

to seek the purest honesty -- that's my favorite line. Can you imagine what this world would be like if everyone was honest and strove to meet the other person's good in all things? Wow.

Thanks for another smart poem with a great message. I'm still very interested in how many poems you've posted this year....

Have you checked?

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Thank you for your review Robyn, from around February I think I posted two per day, but I don?t have the exact number. It has not been easy and it takes a lot of my time and I have several books to put together in the New Year, so next year I will be posting less and concentrating on the contests. I shall still post poems on Fanstory as it is a passion, but not as often as this year. Love Dolly x
reply by robyn corum on 11-Oct-2019
    Go to 'my' in the tool bar and then 'status'. Scroll down to 'Poet Status' and read through. It will tell you exactly how many you've posted this year. If you're interested, you can also click where it says 'click here' and see exactly where you are in the standings. You are so far ahead of everyone else!!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    I did: 569 poems!
reply by robyn corum on 13-Oct-2019
    WOW!!!
Comment from Teri7
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Dolly, This is a very well written poem about learning from our experiences. You used great descriptive words and perfect imagery from the art work you chose. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Teri for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the learning exercise that we can experience by the mistakes we make that often take us on roads that lead to places we cannot return from without help.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Sandra for your review, love Dolly x
Comment from lyenochka
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So true! It's best if we can learn from our mistakes especially if it's a deception in a relationship. We can practice recognizing lies and seek honesty.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Helen for your review, you are so right, love Dolly x
Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your lessons about "truth" and "Learning from Our Experience". Your appealing, alternating rhymes and artful illustration add to the intensity of your message. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Joan for you review, we are continually learning, love Dolly x
Comment from judiverse
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This is so true. We should learn from our past mistakes. Some people keep repeating them, however, like women who get married and divorced several times because they keep choosing the wrong man. People can survive by learning from past mistakes. Great advice, and excellent work with your rhyme and flow. judi

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Judi for your review, we unfortunately do repeat mistakes, why is that? Love Dolly x
Comment from BeasPeas
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Good job with this interesting poem, Dolly. Sometimes we have to make the same mistake a few times before it finally sinks in. Once we've got it, we've got it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Marilyn for your review, you could be right here, love Dolly x
Comment from Gloria ....
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Excellent good advice, Dolly and in fine metre and rhyme. That first lie can be the roughest, but if we navigate the rough waters without losing innocence and faith we are better prepared to handle it after that.

Always a pleasure to read your fine poems. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Gloria for your review, you honour me with your words here, love Dolly x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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One of the most important and most painful lessons in life is conveyed in your well-written, moving poem. Heartbreaking lies and deception CAN be educators if we allow them to be.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thank you Janice for your review, I appreciate your words, love Dolly x