Beanie
50 word flash fiction6 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this is really sad. Your story has a plot which is a heartbreaker for a wife. I'm sure this happens again and again. Good thing this was a fictional story. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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this is really sad. Your story has a plot which is a heartbreaker for a wife. I'm sure this happens again and again. Good thing this was a fictional story. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, how sad! The nerve of that Greg to actually wear Amy's gift while dating another woman! You did a great job telling the story just by drawing attention to clothing. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Oh, how sad! The nerve of that Greg to actually wear Amy's gift while dating another woman! You did a great job telling the story just by drawing attention to clothing. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from juliaSjames
Busted. Amy recognized her handiwork before she knew it was her husband. I can imagine the rest of this story. A neat place of writing. Best of luck mystery writer.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Busted. Amy recognized her handiwork before she knew it was her husband. I can imagine the rest of this story. A neat place of writing. Best of luck mystery writer.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, time for a good-bye knot on the head...not knitted. A good Dribble offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Yeah, time for a good-bye knot on the head...not knitted. A good Dribble offering for the contest! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is a well written dribble.
-The description is very good.
-You bring us into the story
right from the beginning with
Amy wrapped in her scarf
"against the autumn chill."
-Then, she spots a man with
a beanie, similar to the one she made.
-We are already thinking; "this isn't good."
-Her glance over at him told her
all she needed to know, but
more than likely she
probably wished it wasn't so.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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-This is a well written dribble.
-The description is very good.
-You bring us into the story
right from the beginning with
Amy wrapped in her scarf
"against the autumn chill."
-Then, she spots a man with
a beanie, similar to the one she made.
-We are already thinking; "this isn't good."
-Her glance over at him told her
all she needed to know, but
more than likely she
probably wished it wasn't so.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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A most encouraging review zanya
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You are very welcome, zanya.
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
A great entry for the flash fiction contest! Poor Amy, sad that he would still wear her beanie while he's with another girl. Great job and good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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A great entry for the flash fiction contest! Poor Amy, sad that he would still wear her beanie while he's with another girl. Great job and good luck!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reading zanya
