On Air Force One
50 Word Flash Fiction contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. This is a well conceived an interesting 50 word flash story. You have to be quick to get your story completed and you did a good job with an amusing final statement. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. This is a well conceived an interesting 50 word flash story. You have to be quick to get your story completed and you did a good job with an amusing final statement. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Robert. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You're welcome.
Comment from LyndaS
Ha! This is a great entry for this flash fiction story contest. Your first paragraph really sets the stage. The ending cracked me up! Didn't expect it at all. Well written with some killer art. This will do you proud in the booth. Well done! Lynda
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Ha! This is a great entry for this flash fiction story contest. Your first paragraph really sets the stage. The ending cracked me up! Didn't expect it at all. Well written with some killer art. This will do you proud in the booth. Well done! Lynda
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Lynda. I love posting dumb stuff like this. Lol. Have a great night. Thank you again.
Comment from Rikki66
The writing is the matter all else is just fluff. Best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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The writing is the matter all else is just fluff. Best of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Wow, thank you for the great review and the big sixer, Rikki. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
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You are truly welcome.
rikki
Comment from rspoet
You've written a clever story for the flash fiction contest.
Nothing quite like first hand information when writing a story.
I wonder how he knew about the contest?
Well done. Good luck in the voting.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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You've written a clever story for the flash fiction contest.
Nothing quite like first hand information when writing a story.
I wonder how he knew about the contest?
Well done. Good luck in the voting.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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He checked his phone for FS contests just before they went in. Haha. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Robert. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Raul1
I like how ridiculous you wrote this story. It has a funny sense of humor. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I like how ridiculous you wrote this story. It has a funny sense of humor. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Raul. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image for your story.
-I wasn't going to read it,
but I knew nothing like this
had happened, so I read on.
-You do a good job
in creating suspense, as
the narr. yells out about a laptop!
-I like the reply he got-"Why?"
-Good twist at the end
that made me laugh!
-Good luck in the contest;
I enjoyed your creativity.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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-Good image for your story.
-I wasn't going to read it,
but I knew nothing like this
had happened, so I read on.
-You do a good job
in creating suspense, as
the narr. yells out about a laptop!
-I like the reply he got-"Why?"
-Good twist at the end
that made me laugh!
-Good luck in the contest;
I enjoyed your creativity.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Pam. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a wonderful night.
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You are very welcome. You have a good night, too.
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Haha! This made me chuckle. It was creative and amusing, perfect for the flash fiction contest. Great job on your story. Good luck and happy writing!
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Haha! This made me chuckle. It was creative and amusing, perfect for the flash fiction contest. Great job on your story. Good luck and happy writing!
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Melonie. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great night.
