Beauty IS Within
Our mirrors show us the aging process.3 total reviews
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Great poem, I liked the rhymes and the flow. Is the word supposed to be "mirror"? I wasn't sure if that's what you were talking about. Also the stanza with only two lines throws off the flow of the poem a bit. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Great poem, I liked the rhymes and the flow. Is the word supposed to be "mirror"? I wasn't sure if that's what you were talking about. Also the stanza with only two lines throws off the flow of the poem a bit. Keep it up!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about beauty being from within. You used very good descriptive words and I like the very last line where you said God will do it for me! I believe the word mirror is misspelled. I think instead of mirrow it is spelled mirror. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This is a very well written poem about beauty being from within. You used very good descriptive words and I like the very last line where you said God will do it for me! I believe the word mirror is misspelled. I think instead of mirrow it is spelled mirror. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great attitude and truth dealing with aging. This is so warped by focusing on the outside. Keep writing and have a great day! Glad you're not going with purple.
Bill
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Great attitude and truth dealing with aging. This is so warped by focusing on the outside. Keep writing and have a great day! Glad you're not going with purple.
Bill
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
