High Above the Trees
A Cascade Poem for the Pic This Challenge17 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I guess a trip on a balloon in a calm, warm October day will be a good way to feel in Heaven:) I like the start because is settling the mood:"Floating high above the trees
I feel the warm October breeze
Leaving troubles far behind
as peace begins to soothe my mind."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I guess a trip on a balloon in a calm, warm October day will be a good way to feel in Heaven:) I like the start because is settling the mood:"Floating high above the trees
I feel the warm October breeze
Leaving troubles far behind
as peace begins to soothe my mind."
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
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Nope you will not drag me in one of those:)
Comment from RodG
I cannot imagine taking a balloon ride as I have a tremendous fear of heights (as does the Speaker) yet I can sense her joy of Freedom as she ascends. I especially like when she feels the child in her emerge. Rod
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I cannot imagine taking a balloon ride as I have a tremendous fear of heights (as does the Speaker) yet I can sense her joy of Freedom as she ascends. I especially like when she feels the child in her emerge. Rod
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
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I commend your courage and am glad you enjoyed the ride.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow! Sign me up for the next balloon ride! :) Your offering is so very soothing in its descriptions of how the adventure makes you feel...it calms the reader who isn't even there, but sure feels like they are!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, June!! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Wow! Sign me up for the next balloon ride! :) Your offering is so very soothing in its descriptions of how the adventure makes you feel...it calms the reader who isn't even there, but sure feels like they are!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing, June!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
Comment from dmt1967
This is another great poem using this picture. I like the way this one shows the freedom of the balloon as it floats in the breeze. It captures its essence. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This is another great poem using this picture. I like the way this one shows the freedom of the balloon as it floats in the breeze. It captures its essence. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
Comment from pome lover
lovely. sounds peaceful, as you said.
I don't know about "night-ballooning" though. :)
I liked your descriptions of your feelings and the restorative powers of your balloon flight. very good entry for the contest. Imaginative.
pome lover
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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lovely. sounds peaceful, as you said.
I don't know about "night-ballooning" though. :)
I liked your descriptions of your feelings and the restorative powers of your balloon flight. very good entry for the contest. Imaginative.
pome lover
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written cascade poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture this challenge. To see the world from a different perspective is always refreshing and eye opening.
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A very well-written cascade poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture this challenge. To see the world from a different perspective is always refreshing and eye opening.
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this scenic ride in a balloon through your writing. I would like to do that sometime. Have you or are you just experiencing it through your writing? Bill
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Thanks for sharing this scenic ride in a balloon through your writing. I would like to do that sometime. Have you or are you just experiencing it through your writing? Bill
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind review. I actually dreaded going up in a hot air balloon, but for our 40th anniversary my husband convinced me to go up in one. I was pleasantly surprised at how peaceful it was and actually enjoyed seeing the wildlife frolicking in Florida's everglades!
