Scene at a Honey Dew Dipping 4
a script scene with Pez and Pallas9 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
"perfume bottle" a good name for a sewage dump. Finding teeth, particularly real ones, adds another and interesting dimension to this script. Makes you wonder who's they are and how they ended up in there? Would be one way to dispose of somebody.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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"perfume bottle" a good name for a sewage dump. Finding teeth, particularly real ones, adds another and interesting dimension to this script. Makes you wonder who's they are and how they ended up in there? Would be one way to dispose of somebody.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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We'll soon know.
Comment from nomi338
I now have to wonder about the intelligence of both men. If they think some bad action may have taken place on their uncle Zeb's place, and that he may be involved, the last thing they should want to do is to let him know that hey have suspicions about his guilt and or innocence.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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I now have to wonder about the intelligence of both men. If they think some bad action may have taken place on their uncle Zeb's place, and that he may be involved, the last thing they should want to do is to let him know that hey have suspicions about his guilt and or innocence.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Family. Trusted to a fault.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
The plot thickens LOL. A set of real teeth begins to make this more than a few random finds and it sounds like Zeb has some explaining to do. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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The plot thickens LOL. A set of real teeth begins to make this more than a few random finds and it sounds like Zeb has some explaining to do. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Hopefully we can wrap this up in the next scene or two.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Uh, oh. If the teeth aren't false, then... whose teeth are they? And why is there a wig in there? The finger is the most mysterious. Can't wait to see how you wrap up this one! :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Uh, oh. If the teeth aren't false, then... whose teeth are they? And why is there a wig in there? The finger is the most mysterious. Can't wait to see how you wrap up this one! :)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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I needed to throw these in to remove the possibility that the other pieces weren?t coincidental.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Eeeeewwwww..... first a finger then a wig now the teeth... I'm a bit concerned at this point! ;) This is getting to be really icky as well as creepy, Bill... :) Look forward to the wrap up that 'ties' all these items together... Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Eeeeewwwww..... first a finger then a wig now the teeth... I'm a bit concerned at this point! ;) This is getting to be really icky as well as creepy, Bill... :) Look forward to the wrap up that 'ties' all these items together... Yvette
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I was going to end here but the revelation of the teeth needed to be a cliff hanger.
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LOL! :) ;)
Comment from tim dodd
ik real teeth. reminds me of
a murder mystery I saw on tv
a man froze his wife and then
fed her into a wood chipper
all the found was 1 tooth in the river
they were searching in. With the chain of
evidence it was enough to convict. It was the
only time someone was convicted of murder
without a body or at least a part. just one molar
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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ik real teeth. reminds me of
a murder mystery I saw on tv
a man froze his wife and then
fed her into a wood chipper
all the found was 1 tooth in the river
they were searching in. With the chain of
evidence it was enough to convict. It was the
only time someone was convicted of murder
without a body or at least a part. just one molar
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Yuck!
Comment from lyenochka
Yikes! Not false teeth?? Oh dear. I am hoping a big rainfall will happen soon to refresh the air! But do they really want to ask Uncle Zeb? Would he want it all to be a secret?
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Yikes! Not false teeth?? Oh dear. I am hoping a big rainfall will happen soon to refresh the air! But do they really want to ask Uncle Zeb? Would he want it all to be a secret?
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Let?s not flush Uncle Zeb yet.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Humorous, entertaining, grossly possible, and you left me hanging. Finger, wig, teeth ... I can't wait to read where this is going.
Love your script!
Gale
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Humorous, entertaining, grossly possible, and you left me hanging. Finger, wig, teeth ... I can't wait to read where this is going.
Love your script!
Gale
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you, CG.
Comment from judiverse
I think they should notify the police. In their eagerness to uncover all the evidence, they might relieve Pez and Pallas of their digging duties. They should ask Zeb about any strange disappearances he might remember. Pez goads Pallas a little when he tells him he has a lock on ignorance. The events in this scene make you wonder what they'll uncover next. judi
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I think they should notify the police. In their eagerness to uncover all the evidence, they might relieve Pez and Pallas of their digging duties. They should ask Zeb about any strange disappearances he might remember. Pez goads Pallas a little when he tells him he has a lock on ignorance. The events in this scene make you wonder what they'll uncover next. judi
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Pez is typically quite reticent, and is full of dirty secrets, and would likely suppress any evidence of wrongdoing. Pallas is in unfamiliar waters here. The two are twenty years apart in age, so their thinking is totally different.
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Thanks for reminding me of the age differences. Curious to see what happens. Smells like foul play to me. judi
