Sensational Undertones
An 'Even-the-Odds' contest offering for October22 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This even and odd poem, Sensational Undertones, has the proper syllable set up and pays homage to the changing season and its cool qualities. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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This even and odd poem, Sensational Undertones, has the proper syllable set up and pays homage to the changing season and its cool qualities. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks much for your review!!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
like your poem; it gives scenery, thoughtful words about autumn's splendors. The colors of your verses add much touch to the poem, too. Good luck in the contest.
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like your poem; it gives scenery, thoughtful words about autumn's splendors. The colors of your verses add much touch to the poem, too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Gail Denham
To feel fall. That is a good concept and I'd like to do that - but around here we've gone straight into winter - it was 12 degrees this morning and bound to be that for a few days -
So I'd like to bask in fall smells, kick leaves, enjoy that time.
Good job with your description.
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To feel fall. That is a good concept and I'd like to do that - but around here we've gone straight into winter - it was 12 degrees this morning and bound to be that for a few days -
So I'd like to bask in fall smells, kick leaves, enjoy that time.
Good job with your description.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Oh, wouldn't we all?!! Thank you for the wonderful review -- stay warm!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
What a dazzling, yet comforting Even-the-Odds poetic offering. I love the month of October - not for Halloween - but for its beauty. Here, in northern Michigan, October burst with energy, comfort, and grandeur.
You have captured its essence in your exceptionally well-crafted poetic offering.
Thank you!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer,
What a dazzling, yet comforting Even-the-Odds poetic offering. I love the month of October - not for Halloween - but for its beauty. Here, in northern Michigan, October burst with energy, comfort, and grandeur.
You have captured its essence in your exceptionally well-crafted poetic offering.
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Well, I am glad you enjoyed, Lady D -- twas very unpopular in the contest!! ;) :) On my way out the door to P-T, just checkin' in really fast -- will write the reviews from the contest when I get back later in the day (got some errands to cover while I'm in town...). :) Take care of you up there and thank you again! ;) Yvette
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What a shame, Yvette!
I love it...
No rhyme or reason in these contests...
Take Care!
diane
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Sensational Undertones", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Sensational Undertones", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much for your review!!
Dear ANON, you're very welcome!
Comment from June Sargent
Lovely entry for the contest - presentation is perfect, with the changing hues. I do have mixed feelings about October - it's beautiful and full of treats for the senses -the refreshing cool nights, sound of rustling leaves, scents of ripe fruits and vegetables, taste of cider donuts, and of course the colors. But then I remember Winter is coming...
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Lovely entry for the contest - presentation is perfect, with the changing hues. I do have mixed feelings about October - it's beautiful and full of treats for the senses -the refreshing cool nights, sound of rustling leaves, scents of ripe fruits and vegetables, taste of cider donuts, and of course the colors. But then I remember Winter is coming...
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your colorful comments! Have a great day!!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Your description of Autumn is spot on. This is an excellent entry in the 5-7-5 contest. It should do very well in the voting booth. You may have written the winner.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Your description of Autumn is spot on. This is an excellent entry in the 5-7-5 contest. It should do very well in the voting booth. You may have written the winner.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
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Thanks much, Thomas!!
Comment from Sally Law
How lovely, dear mystery writer. The ombré format leads me down your fall path. A lovely autumnal setting you have recreated here with poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, dearest poet.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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How lovely, dear mystery writer. The ombré format leads me down your fall path. A lovely autumnal setting you have recreated here with poetry.
Sending you my best today as always, dearest poet.
Sal xo
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you, my dear lady, for this wonderful review!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written evens and odds work, related to the etheree poem, but cleverly designed differently. This is a superbly written, within a language rich texture to accompany it. Well done, an excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
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A beautifully written evens and odds work, related to the etheree poem, but cleverly designed differently. This is a superbly written, within a language rich texture to accompany it. Well done, an excellent entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Roy, for your wonderful review!
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Most welcome
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are colorful, calming and beautiful. I really enjoyed
the read of this poem. It brought back so memories if fall in New York.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is exceptional and
brings out so much beauty.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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The author's words are colorful, calming and beautiful. I really enjoyed
the read of this poem. It brought back so memories if fall in New York.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is exceptional and
brings out so much beauty.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review!
