Dark and light
faith inspiration31 total reviews
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a lovely poem, and the picture really complements your work. I love the creativity and ideas here, I just want to point out a few things.
1. 3rd stanza - the lost drop does not rhyme along with the rest of the pattern
2. 1st stanza - to know Thy faith it's an ancient art. Did you mean IS an ancient art? Or do you need punctuation to say something in a different way.? I hope you don't mind the suggestions. It is a wonderful poem.
TerryC.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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This is a lovely poem, and the picture really complements your work. I love the creativity and ideas here, I just want to point out a few things.
1. 3rd stanza - the lost drop does not rhyme along with the rest of the pattern
2. 1st stanza - to know Thy faith it's an ancient art. Did you mean IS an ancient art? Or do you need punctuation to say something in a different way.? I hope you don't mind the suggestions. It is a wonderful poem.
TerryC.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your suggestions Terry
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Faith Poetry contest.
This well rhymed verse tells finding the light with God.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Faith Poetry contest.
This well rhymed verse tells finding the light with God.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much:) Sharon
Comment from papa55mike
What a beautifully written poem, and I love the picture. He is always with is in many ways, ready to take our hands, and lead us home.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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What a beautifully written poem, and I love the picture. He is always with is in many ways, ready to take our hands, and lead us home.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think we all need a faith where we can rely on it when times get rough. You did a great job and I hope you have this kind of faith so many of us long for. Great job
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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I think we all need a faith where we can rely on it when times get rough. You did a great job and I hope you have this kind of faith so many of us long for. Great job
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again Iza, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Hello again Iza, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review
Comment from lyenochka
What a cool photograph! Great job capture that play of light. I like how your faith poem progresses from the questions and darkness then through prayer and holding God's Hand, you show us the confidence of God's great presence that drives out fear.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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What a cool photograph! Great job capture that play of light. I like how your faith poem progresses from the questions and darkness then through prayer and holding God's Hand, you show us the confidence of God's great presence that drives out fear.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your review I really appreciate your wisdom and feedback.
Comment from Raul1
I had fun reading this poetry. You have written different sets of faith. This person has no fear at all. The lines perfectly rhyme and I see no mistakes. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I had fun reading this poetry. You have written different sets of faith. This person has no fear at all. The lines perfectly rhyme and I see no mistakes. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouragement and your honest heart-lifting review
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Great poem you've written here based on your faith. I like the use of language and imagery throughout the poem to give the reader something to imagine and grasp onto. Great work!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Great poem you've written here based on your faith. I like the use of language and imagery throughout the poem to give the reader something to imagine and grasp onto. Great work!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind words
Comment from JLR
Truly the photo reveal the God I nature, the Celtic people would call that photo a representative view of the "thin place". Your powerful words of faith compliment the total universal knowledge that God is near, there is nothing to fear.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Truly the photo reveal the God I nature, the Celtic people would call that photo a representative view of the "thin place". Your powerful words of faith compliment the total universal knowledge that God is near, there is nothing to fear.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for grasping beyond the words and the picture; from where I come, faith kept the nation alive.
Comment from royowen
Even the darkness is as light to you, Psalm 139:12. Resounds in my spirit as you have written the Iza. A beautifully written ode to God, the almighty one. I love the way you piece your words, and articulately written in good language, and sweetly shining in generally abab rhymed quatrains, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Even the darkness is as light to you, Psalm 139:12. Resounds in my spirit as you have written the Iza. A beautifully written ode to God, the almighty one. I love the way you piece your words, and articulately written in good language, and sweetly shining in generally abab rhymed quatrains, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind comments; it elevates my spirit.
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Bless you
