Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I do like the photo Iza it's gorgeous. And I enjoyed the poem you've written around it about your Faith that one day you will get to hold Thy hand. Lovely presentation.
cheers and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Such a lovely name, thank you so much Pearl

Comment from May 1

Excellent

This is such a beautifully written poem. I really enjoyed reading it and I think that it is an amazing contest entry. All in all, this is a beautiful poem and I love the image you chose to go with it.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thank you so much May for choosing to review this poem from the ocean of poems that are flying on fan story web site🙃

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

I love this poem about forgiveness and the freedom it brings. I especially like the stanza:

I pray to hold Thy hand and see
There is no darkness after me,
Because you just forgive my deed
I can walk again relieved

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thank you so much Darleene

Comment from Badger_29

Excellent

Get rich thick and meaningful I found this to be somewhat of a parallel of walking on the sand but with its own particularly appealing message. I like the random poetic license you use in the middle with concepts that are strong together with a flexible logic. Thoroughly enjoyed

Blessings,

Brother Badger

Cull

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2020

Thank you so much brother Badger🙃

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Great poem! As long as your faith follows thee, your world is safe and worry free! Keep the faith for sometimes it's all we have, is our faith!
Keep right on writing!
Patty

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Patty thank you so much for your wonderful review

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this and the message conveyed in it. It will be there in the end with its dance partner hope along side it. He is there and always will be guiding us out of the darkness and into the light. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020

Hi Jeffrey, and thank you so much for your wonderful and encouraging review.

Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

It is a good picture - I like the part about "walking in the sun" and the fact you have strong faith - plus your poem goes so nicely with the photo. It's a good effort.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you so much for your honest review:)

Comment from Carl DeVere

Excellent

Yes! Well done and admirably stated. Please keep sending these kinds of wonderful messages to a world that seems to have forgotten the importance of such a relationship. We are these days enslaved to a kind of electronic madness where everyone clutches a piece of plastic, engrossed in the "news." Some time must be taken to reflect on a greater purpose. Thank you for the reflection.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you so much for your amazing and encouraging review

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

That is a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany this piece. This poem radiates with trust. There is an assurance that sweeps over you giving you silent courage to carry on.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Your faith comes shining through in this verse. The lines that spoke to me are these:

I pray to hold Thy hand and see
There is no darkness after me

Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you so much, Debi:)