Love's Perfume
The scent of love...13 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this picture is so unique. The wording expresses the smell of perfume. I wonder if this has anything to do with air that we breath? Good luck in the contest. Some of these instructions I have to read through more than once.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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this picture is so unique. The wording expresses the smell of perfume. I wonder if this has anything to do with air that we breath? Good luck in the contest. Some of these instructions I have to read through more than once.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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LoL! Well it said breath and be creative! So hopefully I have done that! I mean you do have to breathe in to smell perfume! Haha!! Thank you for offering your feedback! It?s all fun to me and I appreciate you even stopped to read! xoxo
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we definitely have to breath to smell perfume. Great job! Love the thought.
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xo thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery and
structure of the poem.
-You give a very good
description of the opening image.
-By placing "intoxicating" in the
middle, you add emphasis to it.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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-Very nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery and
structure of the poem.
-You give a very good
description of the opening image.
-By placing "intoxicating" in the
middle, you add emphasis to it.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you! Appreciate you enjoyed my little offering! xoxo
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You are welcome.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderfully sensual offering for this contest... great job delivering a sense of urgency and almost worshipfulness with only 11 syllables!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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A wonderfully sensual offering for this contest... great job delivering a sense of urgency and almost worshipfulness with only 11 syllables!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much! I just hope it?s not too outside the box for ?air?. They did say to be creative lol!! Appreciate you enjoyed it! xoxo
