Love's Perfume
The scent of love...13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about love's perfume that is intoxicating and bring forth the breath of life from very deep inside.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about love's perfume that is intoxicating and bring forth the breath of life from very deep inside.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thanks Sandra! appreciate the supportive feedback!
Comment from Mia Twysted
"Love's perfume" This is a great way to start. It immediaelly gave me a close pull as if someone was pulling me into them.
"Intoxicating" Now that I am in I do feel a little intoxicated. The suggestion helps create the mood.
"Breath of life" I am renewed as I take a breath and release myself back into the real world.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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"Love's perfume" This is a great way to start. It immediaelly gave me a close pull as if someone was pulling me into them.
"Intoxicating" Now that I am in I do feel a little intoxicated. The suggestion helps create the mood.
"Breath of life" I am renewed as I take a breath and release myself back into the real world.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much! your precious rating is so sincerely appreciated! so happy you enjoyed this! xoxo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this and the message conveyed in it. This is a beautiful, expressive, descriptive, and very well thought out way to describe love. I guess it is like a sweet fragrance, drawing you in. This is fine work that I've enjoyed reading. Great job and well done. Good luck in the contest. You should do very well with this.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I really like this and the message conveyed in it. This is a beautiful, expressive, descriptive, and very well thought out way to describe love. I guess it is like a sweet fragrance, drawing you in. This is fine work that I've enjoyed reading. Great job and well done. Good luck in the contest. You should do very well with this.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your awesome encouragement! Your feedback on this is greatly appreciated!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3 air poem, Love's Perfume, has the right set up and leaves it to my imagination what bodily smell will translate to love. It has to be hers as mine do not lend themselves to positive thoughts.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This 3-5-3 air poem, Love's Perfume, has the right set up and leaves it to my imagination what bodily smell will translate to love. It has to be hers as mine do not lend themselves to positive thoughts.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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haha!! that's funny! believe me, men scent is for women and women scent is for men! :) thanks for your awesome feedback! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true and if you we can be touched by just a breath of love then our hearts will rejoice, just as I did reading your intuitive and ambient words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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So true and if you we can be touched by just a breath of love then our hearts will rejoice, just as I did reading your intuitive and ambient words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you Dolly! your encouraging review is greatly appreciated!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all eleven syllables in this moving, romantic piece. Your metaphorical descriptions convey a message about the power of love.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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You have made excellent use of all eleven syllables in this moving, romantic piece. Your metaphorical descriptions convey a message about the power of love.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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thank you so very much! I love doing these short ones, they really challenge the gray matter! ha! appreciate your feedback on this! xoxo
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
You've got an excellent and 3-5-3 here. Love the romantic theme; your choice of artwork; the title was perfect; and you painted a very beautiful image with only six words.
Good wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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You've got an excellent and 3-5-3 here. Love the romantic theme; your choice of artwork; the title was perfect; and you painted a very beautiful image with only six words.
Good wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you sincerely! I wasn?t sure about it but it says to be creative and I do like to write outside that box!! xoxo
Comment from Belen Kintner
I like this, very good use of the 3-5-3. It reminds me of the way everything good is enhanced when you're in love. It's intoxicating, as you wrote. Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I like this, very good use of the 3-5-3. It reminds me of the way everything good is enhanced when you're in love. It's intoxicating, as you wrote. Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much. I do hope it won?t be considered too outside the ?air? box, but it said to be creative!! LoL! Appreciate you took time to enjoy! xoxo
Comment from LyndaS
Way to use those five syllables! Great word. Love's perfume, indeed. Such a passionate picture to go with this. Breathing deep the scent of her hair. Yikes! This is a powerful entry into this contest. Just lovely. Good luck to you. Very well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Way to use those five syllables! Great word. Love's perfume, indeed. Such a passionate picture to go with this. Breathing deep the scent of her hair. Yikes! This is a powerful entry into this contest. Just lovely. Good luck to you. Very well done. Lynda
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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And who would love this better than you my friend! Mwah! xoxo
Comment from JanetRussek
A beautiful thought in so few words. The picture you chose is perfect. I truly enjoyed this piece. Great work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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A beautiful thought in so few words. The picture you chose is perfect. I truly enjoyed this piece. Great work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Hi Janet! I see from your profile that you have been here a while! I am honored you stopped to read my work and once contest is over, you might enjoy some of my work if you enjoyed this! I appreciate your awesome feedback!!!
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See you around the site, kiddo.
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xoxo!!!
