Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Wow--the picture you selected is so vivid, I could almost hear the squawking seagull! I enjoyed the description of your experience in the rhymed couplets. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks so much for your review I appreciate it.

Comment from Ricky1024

Exceptional

This is a "Take a Walk Poetry Contest Entry."
It was Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day!
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thanks, Ricky appreciate it

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This take-a-walk poem, A Hungry Stranger, finds the seagull, making his usual annoying plea for Tim Bits. He'd drink your coffee too if he could.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review, I was holding tight to my coffee lol

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Those seagulls are like the Laurel and Hardy and Marx Brothers of the beach, aren't they?! ;) A fun collection of rhyming couplets to share your seagull encounter! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;)

P.S. Is "Tim bits" a thing...? Or should it be 'tid bits'...? Or is your husband's name Tim... ? :) ;) ;)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Hi in Canada we have timbit pieces of donuts from tim hortons a coffee franchise, Thanks for the review where are you from?
Tim Horton was a hockey player lol you are funny

reply by Y. M. Roger on 06-Oct-2019

Good evening, Laural -- I'm down her in Alabama! ;) :)