Just a Quick Break!
We have to just go every now and again52 total reviews
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest, Yvette. Yeaaaa for Walter, he was indeed a brave doggie to venture out and find a much needed tree. On the other hand, poor Walter having to listen out for Karen. Great job.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Good luck in the contest, Yvette. Yeaaaa for Walter, he was indeed a brave doggie to venture out and find a much needed tree. On the other hand, poor Walter having to listen out for Karen. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL! Thanx for the fun review, Ali -- and I'm really glad you enjoyed our persevering Walter... he's a 'good Joe' and takes care of Karen! ;) :) Take care out there -- Yvette
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I like Walter, Yvette, he reminds me of patience, persistence and determination. You are so welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile Yvette as I had no idea this was a dog until your final words spilled the beans, much enjoyed, your little story is uplifting and cute, love Dolly x
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile Yvette as I had no idea this was a dog until your final words spilled the beans, much enjoyed, your little story is uplifting and cute, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Hooray -- my ruse worked! ;) :) Glad you enjoyed this one, Dolly -- Walter and I are grateful for your review!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
This is fun and fresh from your creative (and a little bit crazy mind.) Dog gone good fun, and a great entry for the dribble flash fiction contest. Sending you my best today and for the approaching contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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This is fun and fresh from your creative (and a little bit crazy mind.) Dog gone good fun, and a great entry for the dribble flash fiction contest. Sending you my best today and for the approaching contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thanx for dropping by for the review, Lady Sal -- Walter is very grateful for your wonderful commentary on his excursion! ;) :) Take care and have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You took us there in the form a dog but at the beginning, I thought it was a little boy looking for a chance to get away for a little while. Then you took us to the thoughts of a pup
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You took us there in the form a dog but at the beginning, I thought it was a little boy looking for a chance to get away for a little while. Then you took us to the thoughts of a pup
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Barb -- Walter thanx you as well! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Yvette, I'm giving you six stars for some great humor in an every day event about a dog going outside for his daily routine. Enjoy your fall break.
Bill
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Yvette, I'm giving you six stars for some great humor in an every day event about a dog going outside for his daily routine. Enjoy your fall break.
Bill
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL! It's that crazy blonde, Bill -- you just never know what she'll come up with next!! ;) Thanx so much for this wonderful review, sir, and I'm so glad you glad you gave Walter the 6-star treatment: he's very thankful as am I!! ;) :) Take care and have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, YM, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Readers don't know right off if this is a man running from the house because he doesn't want to get caught be Karen's husband (as if they are having an affair) or what. Then we hear Walter 'speak his inner thoughts.' Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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You did a great job, YM, with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Readers don't know right off if this is a man running from the house because he doesn't want to get caught be Karen's husband (as if they are having an affair) or what. Then we hear Walter 'speak his inner thoughts.' Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping by on this one, Jan -- glad you enjoyed Walter on his quick romp! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rod A. White
Appreciation of trees... Now, that's a much needed quality we can definitely learn from Walther and critters like him! LOL Good luck in the contest, Yvette! I always appreciate your offerings!
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Appreciation of trees... Now, that's a much needed quality we can definitely learn from Walther and critters like him! LOL Good luck in the contest, Yvette! I always appreciate your offerings!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL! Glad Walter could stand as such a great example for everyone! ;) Thanx for the review, sir, and have a wonderful week! ;) Yvette
Comment from NickieT
I love how fun these flash fictions can be. Your last line gives the reader a new perspective on the story which encourages them to reread it and connect more dots. Best of luck with this entry =)
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I love how fun these flash fictions can be. Your last line gives the reader a new perspective on the story which encourages them to reread it and connect more dots. Best of luck with this entry =)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Nickie -- glad that Walter could make you do a re-read! ;) :) LOL! Keep smiling this week and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned complete and thoroughly engaging story within the word count allotted. You take a clever approach as you begin with the direction of human interaction only to reveal Walter to be a dog. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a well penned complete and thoroughly engaging story within the word count allotted. You take a clever approach as you begin with the direction of human interaction only to reveal Walter to be a dog. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Honestly I read the story before reading the subtitle. As such, I missed the connection between trees and '...the leg hiked' meaning. Now I got it - very, very funny!
My guess is this humorous piece of fiction will earn you a few bones in the contest voting.
Mark
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Yvette,
Honestly I read the story before reading the subtitle. As such, I missed the connection between trees and '...the leg hiked' meaning. Now I got it - very, very funny!
My guess is this humorous piece of fiction will earn you a few bones in the contest voting.
Mark
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL! ;) Thanx for your fun review on this one, Mark -- Walter appreciates your support! ;) :) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
