Just a Quick Break!
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Comment from Ogden
Very good surprise ending!
Can one assume that Karen called out because she didn't want Walter to destroy her tree?
We can't blame Walter for getting pissed off.
;)
Don
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Very good surprise ending!
Can one assume that Karen called out because she didn't want Walter to destroy her tree?
We can't blame Walter for getting pissed off.
;)
Don
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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LOL! Glad Walter made you smile, Don -- thanx for the review!! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome, Yvette.
I'm glad you got a smile of your own out of it!
Don
Comment from Bill Schott
This dribble, Just a Quick Break, has the proper word count and Walter on his way to complete his daily constitution and mark a spot for that often-let-loose interloper from down the road.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This dribble, Just a Quick Break, has the proper word count and Walter on his way to complete his daily constitution and mark a spot for that often-let-loose interloper from down the road.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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LOL! ;) Thanx for the smile on this one, Bill -- good to hear from you!! ;) :) Take care this week - Yvette
Comment from Rikki66
Women can't even let a guy take a whizz without bothering him. This is short but a killer story.
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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Women can't even let a guy take a whizz without bothering him. This is short but a killer story.
rikki))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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LOL!! You are too funny, sir!! :) ;) Thanx so much for those stars and for that big, grinning review! :) Hope all's well down there - haven't heard from you in a while so it's good to read you again! ;) Take care and have a great rest of the week! ;) Yvette
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Yes teacher it has been too long.
Rikki
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Awesome break for the puppy - trees, run for it:) The story is funny and interesting, and you can easily stretched in something longer. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Awesome break for the puppy - trees, run for it:) The story is funny and interesting, and you can easily stretched in something longer. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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So glad you enjoyed Walter's jaunt here, Iza -- thanx for stopping by for the review!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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I am amazed how everything can inspire us to write sparkling pieces such as yours:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the dog couple that seem to have some communication problems. Walter needs to water the tree while Karen needs him inside.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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A very well-written dribble flash fiction about the dog couple that seem to have some communication problems. Walter needs to water the tree while Karen needs him inside.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping by for Walter's little romp, Sandra!! ;) :) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for leading us astray for a short while, only to reveal your devious purpose with the "doggy door" conclusion. I actually wondered why Walter lifted his leg until that clear clue! LOL and best wishes in the Flash contest- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thanks for leading us astray for a short while, only to reveal your devious purpose with the "doggy door" conclusion. I actually wondered why Walter lifted his leg until that clear clue! LOL and best wishes in the Flash contest- Joan
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thanx so much for your review, Joan -- glad you enjoyed Walter's quick jaunt! ;) :) Have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Adri7enne
I keep getting surprised when the holder of the POV is revealed. Lol! Cute. Poor little fellow. He's not being given much time to get the job done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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I keep getting surprised when the holder of the POV is revealed. Lol! Cute. Poor little fellow. He's not being given much time to get the job done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL! ;) So glad you enjoyed Walter on his brief jaunt!! ;) Thanx for the wonderful review, Adri7enne -- glad my ruse worked for a bit! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Clever to use a name not usually associated with dogs in this day and age. It was a great diversion to think someone named Walter had perhaps broken away from a caregiver to see nature, or had left the wife behind in the shopping mall due to claustrophobia, or whatever else it could imply. Then of course, the truth comes out in the end. So cute!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Clever to use a name not usually associated with dogs in this day and age. It was a great diversion to think someone named Walter had perhaps broken away from a caregiver to see nature, or had left the wife behind in the shopping mall due to claustrophobia, or whatever else it could imply. Then of course, the truth comes out in the end. So cute!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL! ;) So glad you enjoyed Walter on his brief jaunt!! ;) Thanx for the wonderful review, Crystie -- glad my ruse worked for a bit! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Susanjohn
LOL!! Poor Walter! Never enough time to sniff around and play outside... Cute little fun story, I'm glad I found it! Totally made me smile and laugh! :-)))
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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LOL!! Poor Walter! Never enough time to sniff around and play outside... Cute little fun story, I'm glad I found it! Totally made me smile and laugh! :-)))
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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He's a funny guy, but he takes care of Karen - LOL! Thank you for your review on this one, Susan -- great of you to drop by for Walter's antics today! ;) :) LOL! Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a cute story. I certainly was surprised to find out Walter is a dog. This is a clever ending. I hope you keep writing more stories with surprise
ending.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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This is a cute story. I certainly was surprised to find out Walter is a dog. This is a clever ending. I hope you keep writing more stories with surprise
ending.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review on this one, Barbara -- great of you to drop by for Walter's antics today! ;) Be sure to stop by more often -- would love to see ya 'round the ole place!! ;) :) LOL! Take care! ;) Yvette
