Song of the Spheres
Otherworldly8 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
And so we wonder - and wonder - what is out there. Who is out there. The coverup the military did on the sightings and such. I udnerstand many people gather at the site every year to - well almost like worsship.
I've always felt that God could very well have peopled another planet - why should we be so valuable to Him? I wonder.
Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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And so we wonder - and wonder - what is out there. Who is out there. The coverup the military did on the sightings and such. I udnerstand many people gather at the site every year to - well almost like worsship.
I've always felt that God could very well have peopled another planet - why should we be so valuable to Him? I wonder.
Good job.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Now there's a very original acrostic offering, sir -- great use of your rhyming couplets to really make this one 'sing'... ;) :) And to think, you smoothly rhymed isotopes!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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LOL! Now there's a very original acrostic offering, sir -- great use of your rhyming couplets to really make this one 'sing'... ;) :) And to think, you smoothly rhymed isotopes!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Well thank you Yvette, and by a strange quark of fate I am being reviewed by a real live physicist. Lol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Songs of the spheres were doubtful, the sources could not be guessed properly, but listeners knew who wrote the score; well said, well done.
Typos:
A celestial cacophany for human ears -- A celestial cacophony for human ears
Repetetive notes in cosmic envelopes --- Repetitive notes in cosmic envelopes
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Songs of the spheres were doubtful, the sources could not be guessed properly, but listeners knew who wrote the score; well said, well done.
Typos:
A celestial cacophany for human ears -- A celestial cacophony for human ears
Repetetive notes in cosmic envelopes --- Repetitive notes in cosmic envelopes
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Oh good catch Al. Thanks I shall swiftly correct those typos.
Thanks for the review.
Best
John
Comment from Alex Rosel
I like this a lot. It captures a bit of the mystery that is the heavens. I assume the answer to the muse "Surely they know who wrote this score" is the Martians.
Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I like this a lot. It captures a bit of the mystery that is the heavens. I assume the answer to the muse "Surely they know who wrote this score" is the Martians.
Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much Alex and yes Martians gets you a cigar... well a cigar shaped UFO anyway.
Best
John
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LOL!
Comment from Susan Larson
Cute acrostic poem and I'm impressed with all the scientific terms you so skillfully worked into it. No, we don't know what to believe anymore. Just read they're going to photograph a black hole in the Milky Way. There's a song for you!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Cute acrostic poem and I'm impressed with all the scientific terms you so skillfully worked into it. No, we don't know what to believe anymore. Just read they're going to photograph a black hole in the Milky Way. There's a song for you!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Well thank you so much Susan. ;) Not sure if I could shine much light on a song a out a black hole. Lol
Best
John
Comment from Cindy Warren
I think there are aliens out there. Why would we be the only life in an endless universe? Perhaps they are even making music. I've seen things in the sky I couldn't identify, but I can't swear they were from another planet. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I think there are aliens out there. Why would we be the only life in an endless universe? Perhaps they are even making music. I've seen things in the sky I couldn't identify, but I can't swear they were from another planet. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Who knows, I believe if you can imagine it then its true.
Thank you so much for kind comments Cindy.
Best
John
Comment from NickieT
I had no idea that acrostics could be so advanced. This is a remarkably neat poem. As a scientist, I don't really like your use of the word "isotopes," but I think that everything else works really well!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I had no idea that acrostics could be so advanced. This is a remarkably neat poem. As a scientist, I don't really like your use of the word "isotopes," but I think that everything else works really well!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks Nickie. LOL
Yes you caught me. :) I of course I took poetic license with the use of "isotopes" in my poem.
Thank you so much for your supportive comments. They are really appreciated.
Best
John
Comment from tim dodd
very nice. I believe there are aliens but they are far far away from us.
They are closer to us then we are to them I think. If you know what I mean. Like this Martians Acrostic very well done
should do well good luck
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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very nice. I believe there are aliens but they are far far away from us.
They are closer to us then we are to them I think. If you know what I mean. Like this Martians Acrostic very well done
should do well good luck
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks Tim. I do appreciate your thoughts on this.
It is incomprehensible to me that there are no intelligent aliens out there. As you say very likely too far away for us to ever cross their path without their intervention.
Best
John
