Smooching With My Pooch
He gave me the run-around. (50 words)17 total reviews
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Also very clever... you should've known, though, that it would never work. There's the dog breath you'd have to contend with day in and day out. Not to mention the whining...
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Also very clever... you should've known, though, that it would never work. There's the dog breath you'd have to contend with day in and day out. Not to mention the whining...
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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I wouldn't mind whining if it was wining and dining. Even the pig couldn't get that right - it was swining and dining with him.
Comment from poetwatch
That's one beautiful dog, LisaMay. You have good taste I see that now. :) Don't stop loving and living a life with those that need love also. Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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That's one beautiful dog, LisaMay. You have good taste I see that now. :) Don't stop loving and living a life with those that need love also. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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I go for quality. But that dog was too strong for me - he dragged me off into the bushes. Later, I threw a ball for him and he never came back. So much for love.
Comment from patcelaw
Your series is fun to read. I love the photo of this one. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder they say. Have a pleasant day and may it be full of blessings.
Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Your series is fun to read. I love the photo of this one. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder they say. Have a pleasant day and may it be full of blessings.
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Isn't that dawg so deliciously un-beautiful! Thanks for your loyalty to these stories.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifty word relationship notice. This one can work out for a lifetime. He will be a loyal friend even after the relationship ends.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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A very well-written fifty word relationship notice. This one can work out for a lifetime. He will be a loyal friend even after the relationship ends.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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You are right about the loyalty - more lasting than some relationships.
Comment from lyenochka
Another fun one - this time with a "pooch" who has been "leading you on." I often see this with dog walkers that it's clearly the dog that's walking their humans.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Another fun one - this time with a "pooch" who has been "leading you on." I often see this with dog walkers that it's clearly the dog that's walking their humans.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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And is it the dogs who begin to look like their owners or the owners start to match their pooches?
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Haha! So perfect! This series is turning out to be wonderful offering for us FS readers! It is so entertaining and you can't help but giggle at the humor! Write in my friend! I finally have a six to give towards these excellent stories!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Haha! So perfect! This series is turning out to be wonderful offering for us FS readers! It is so entertaining and you can't help but giggle at the humor! Write in my friend! I finally have a six to give towards these excellent stories!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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It pleases me hugely to think I am putting giggles out there - free to good homes. I very much appreciate stealing one of your 6s.
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Glad I had one to give my friend!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This new boyfriend poem is doggone cute, and the subject is only a little bowl-legged (or is it bull-legged, if it's a bulldog?). I like the last line. Everyone knows, based on this poem, that love is ruff. Love your doggy de-tails!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This new boyfriend poem is doggone cute, and the subject is only a little bowl-legged (or is it bull-legged, if it's a bulldog?). I like the last line. Everyone knows, based on this poem, that love is ruff. Love your doggy de-tails!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Your additional puns are doggone cute too! I love how you are getting into the spirit of these silly stories.
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done for your critter stories. You might put in a bit more about his personality - for example "he smooches with me on the couch, but I know he likes my neighbor best. " or some such. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Well done for your critter stories. You might put in a bit more about his personality - for example "he smooches with me on the couch, but I know he likes my neighbor best. " or some such. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks for giving the story such a high rating! I really appreciate your loyalty with this series. Have you got a favourite yet?
I'm keeping all the stories to 50 words, which limits how much detail I can put in.
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I'll have to review them again - don't have a fav. yet - I look forward to more. There have been some that used more of the "critter" angles.
Comment from juliaSjames
I continue to be a faithful follower of this fun series, LisaMay. Your creativity flows unabated. Sorry you couldn't make it. Perhaps your breeds were incompatible. Keep trying.
Loved your author notes
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I continue to be a faithful follower of this fun series, LisaMay. Your creativity flows unabated. Sorry you couldn't make it. Perhaps your breeds were incompatible. Keep trying.
Loved your author notes
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I commend your loyalty. I think I am just a bitch, that's why it didn't work. Actually, the bulldog was too boring for me - he was too fat to chase the frisbee.
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LOLOL
Comment from Patty Palmer
Well I guess we could say that getting together with this guy has left you barking up the wrong tree. It's up to you but I think he does play around a lot and at silly games to boot! I mean what's this frizbee thing he's got going on. How many times is he going to keep chasing that dang thing before he realizes that he's only being made a fool of by the kids at the park? Get over it already! Well, I hope he makes a clean break from all of this behavior!
Take care@!
Patty
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Well I guess we could say that getting together with this guy has left you barking up the wrong tree. It's up to you but I think he does play around a lot and at silly games to boot! I mean what's this frizbee thing he's got going on. How many times is he going to keep chasing that dang thing before he realizes that he's only being made a fool of by the kids at the park? Get over it already! Well, I hope he makes a clean break from all of this behavior!
Take care@!
Patty
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your fun review. I don't think that bulldog is the frisbee chasing type. That would be beneath his dignity. He looks more like the 'smoking a pipe while reading the newspaper' type of guy. Far too sedate for me. Plus he drinks whiskey and I don't like the smell.
