I'm the Happiest
A Senryu Poem12 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, kahpot. Your poem is in great form. I like the ,art, the well-chosen words, and your super message. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Congratulations on your 2nd place win, kahpot. Your poem is in great form. I like the ,art, the well-chosen words, and your super message. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you, I thought this was a tricky prompt but I always have fun entering to read all the others****kahpot
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is not a very self-denigrating piece, but I like it anyway for its exuberence that fits in so well with the artwork. I wish it good luck in the polling booth.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This is not a very self-denigrating piece, but I like it anyway for its exuberence that fits in so well with the artwork. I wish it good luck in the polling booth.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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As the prompt asked for "satire or irony" I don't think to speak damagingly would have been appropriate, thank you for your comments
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Maybe I misunderstood (highly probable) I took it as satire or irony turned against the author him/herself
Comment from NickieT
This is excellent commentary on the idea of happiness verses perceived success or intelligence. I love how you have chosen to use your minimal syllables =)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This is excellent commentary on the idea of happiness verses perceived success or intelligence. I love how you have chosen to use your minimal syllables =)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gail Denham
Well joy bells! Nice picture to accompany your happy proclamation. And I like that. I want to be that one jumping around in happiness. The Bible tells us "rejoice evermore". That's something I want to remember always.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Well joy bells! Nice picture to accompany your happy proclamation. And I like that. I want to be that one jumping around in happiness. The Bible tells us "rejoice evermore". That's something I want to remember always.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mark D. R.
Whether you intended it our not, this writing prompt can easily be written about the biography of Muhammad Ali aka Cassius Clay. He was the greatest.
Good luck in this contest voting.
I too have used VMarguarite for the artwork to accompany my posts - good choice!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Whether you intended it our not, this writing prompt can easily be written about the biography of Muhammad Ali aka Cassius Clay. He was the greatest.
Good luck in this contest voting.
I too have used VMarguarite for the artwork to accompany my posts - good choice!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu. As long as there is things we can learn from others that are useful we can feel happy to learn to help ourselves in life to move forward and not stuck in one place.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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A very well-written Senryu. As long as there is things we can learn from others that are useful we can feel happy to learn to help ourselves in life to move forward and not stuck in one place.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from dragonpoet
This senryu is to true. Learning is great and the people on this website
are very free with their knowledge. You learn a lot here.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This senryu is to true. Learning is great and the people on this website
are very free with their knowledge. You learn a lot here.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
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Don't mention it.
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I'm the happiest", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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"I'm the happiest", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from tfawcus
Those who are prepared to continue learning are generally among the happiest. It's both rewarding and fulfilling. I enjoyed reading your sentry and the positivity of it.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Those who are prepared to continue learning are generally among the happiest. It's both rewarding and fulfilling. I enjoyed reading your sentry and the positivity of it.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gloria ....
Well this is terrific. A great way to senryu oneself with just the right bit of self-deprecation.
Excellent contest entry and much luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Well this is terrific. A great way to senryu oneself with just the right bit of self-deprecation.
Excellent contest entry and much luck to you in the booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
