Sad was the day
When my love passed away.7 total reviews
Comment from Edna Estrada
This is terribly sad. Definitely made me feel the pain and desperation of seeing a loved on slip away. The loneliness you feel when they're gone. I also like the glimmer of hope. I hope it's true. I hope we do get to see them again.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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This is terribly sad. Definitely made me feel the pain and desperation of seeing a loved on slip away. The loneliness you feel when they're gone. I also like the glimmer of hope. I hope it's true. I hope we do get to see them again.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars. very much appreciated.
Comment from country ranch writer
I am sorry for your loss I lost the love of my life after being married for 53 years the 15th of this month would have been 54. He died on mMarch 23rd from cancer. He is always with me in my heart.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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I am sorry for your loss I lost the love of my life after being married for 53 years the 15th of this month would have been 54. He died on mMarch 23rd from cancer. He is always with me in my heart.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your review and stars It sure gets lonely after all those years, doesn't it? Sorry for your loss also.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is deceptively simple and lyrical. I like the way you managed to mention God two times and the Lord once, turning this into both a love-based and faith-based poem at the same time as addressing the theme of sadness. I also like the suggestion or declaration of life after life, with the line "She comes to me/In my dreams at night." Tender entry.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This is deceptively simple and lyrical. I like the way you managed to mention God two times and the Lord once, turning this into both a love-based and faith-based poem at the same time as addressing the theme of sadness. I also like the suggestion or declaration of life after life, with the line "She comes to me/In my dreams at night." Tender entry.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you, for the very nice review and stars.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a wonderfully penned offering for the contest, Willie -- your choice of such short lines with deep-emotional imagery stoke feelings in your reader to 'be' where your heart is... great job!! ;) Best of luck to you at the polls! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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This is a wonderfully penned offering for the contest, Willie -- your choice of such short lines with deep-emotional imagery stoke feelings in your reader to 'be' where your heart is... great job!! ;) Best of luck to you at the polls! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Yvette, for your kind words and review
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your love
Lost is more than sadness, its soul brokening. The lost of a child is the hardest....Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.â?º
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Your love
Lost is more than sadness, its soul brokening. The lost of a child is the hardest....Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.â?º
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Iza, for your very nice review and stars
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is a very sad day! When you have spent 60 years in the company of someone you love dearly, it is wrenching when you lose them. Your poem rings with love and loss. It resonates with me as I too have my lost love in my dreams.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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It is a very sad day! When you have spent 60 years in the company of someone you love dearly, it is wrenching when you lose them. Your poem rings with love and loss. It resonates with me as I too have my lost love in my dreams.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Raffelina for your nice review and stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There's sadness in your words here Willie and I feel your pain. Sixty years is a long time to spend with someone and then to lose them. Your words are heartfelt and filled with sadness, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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There's sadness in your words here Willie and I feel your pain. Sixty years is a long time to spend with someone and then to lose them. Your words are heartfelt and filled with sadness, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Dolly, for the very nice review and five stars.
