Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a very nicely composed duo of spaceship poems, Patricia. I like your theme and the form looks perfect. These lines are my favorite:
"Strolling with Him, He's guiding each step
along the narrow way
with gentle
hands."
Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019

Thank you Marilyn for the very nice review. Have a good week.

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

I always like your spaceship poems, especially when they are double like this one. They look really pretty on the page.
Beautiful quote and poem.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019

Thank you for your lovely review.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

What a wonderful testimony using your spaceship format. I tried to do one the other day and forgot the syllable count, now I can try it again. Love the message you convey

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019

Seek ye the Lord while he may be found, call ye upon him while he is near:

Isaiah 55:6
























Thanks for your review. I hope you will be able to do a spaceship one now that you have the syllable count.

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

This is a beautiful spiritual poem. A true testament of your unfaltering faith in the Lord. It's something we should remember every day. Thank you for sharing your wisdom this reminder with us

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019

Thanks for your lovely review.

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

My heart and soul are filled with His love, your words made me feel peaceful and serene. Something we all need in todays world. Your style is unique and special. The entire package gets a thumbs up. Thank you for writing this.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019

Thanks for your lovely review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Good morning Patricia. I always enjoy reading your verses in the spaceship format which I understand you invented. Good job on that and on executing a lovely faith-filled poem!

Melissa

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019

Thanks for your lovely review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine spaceship presentation filled with warm sentiments and tranquility as you feel safe within your faith and stay strong and committed, fine words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very well written poem you have penned done in your spaceship format about our dear Savior that does take care of us. It is great to be able to trust Him and know that He is truly trustworthy. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review.

reply by Teri7 on 04-Oct-2019

you are so welcome my friend. love and blessings, Teri

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This is a well-written, lovely Christian poem. He will do all these things for us IF we trust Him. You're right about His provision of our needs. We just have to be sure we don't confuse wants and needs.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Janetsue

Excellent

Love both the format and the glorious message...Our Savior is always there waiting to lift us up when we are feeling beaten down by the ways of this fallen world. I'm so glad you shared this beautiful posting! xoxo

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review.