Comment from Melonie Kirchoff

Excellent

I actually really like this poem! Usually it can be really hard to be artful in such a short poem, this is why I have a hard time with Haikus and such but this was jsut really beautiful.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. I find reading and writing haikus is the best practice and they will get easier with time. Cheers, judester

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Great poem about the process of writing. We have all been there and your words melded together nicely. What a great feeling it is to begin putting confusion into words. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for the review. Sometimes I have an great idea, but the words just do not come together, usually later, cheers, judester

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

If we don't write it down, it is lost forever and many of my thoughts are this elusive and even in the dead of night, I write it down! I enjoyed your words here, you captured the essence of those elusive thoughts, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for the review Dolly. I agree, write it down, even if just one word. I like to go for a nice relaxing walk. Cheers, judester